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Reviews for Nature vs. Nurture

By : Stoney
  • From ANON - Alisha Steele on January 11, 2006
    Very nice!
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  • From ANON - Dayast Joy on July 14, 2005
    What a brilliantly written ending; powerful and poignant and woven so seamlessly with the movie plot. I loved the way you injected fragments of thoughts/memories in brackets to give the sentences more force, making the words more emotionally charged. I do hope that you write more, this was a real treat, thanks for sharing :)
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  • From ANON - lina on July 13, 2005
    sniff sniff....

    that was so sad... and so true... sniff...

    excuse while I cry my eyes out.
    lina.
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  • From ANON - ImaPseudonym on July 13, 2005
    I love your spin on Anakin's insecurities. Unrequited love (at least, as far as he knew) would certainly be enough to drive one to despair. And Obi-Wan's train of thoughts was entirely believable. Which is to say nothing about your overall skill with writing, which is (as you know, I'm sure) fantastic.

    I'm looking forward to reading more of your work, regarding Anakin/Obi-Wan.
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  • From ANON - DayastJoy on July 12, 2005
    What a beautifully written and well constructed story! I love the way that you have captured Anakin's need and his vulnerability. Too many authors write him as pure evil, but I think that his anger and pride were always matched with his overly-fierce capacity for love, right to the end of his story. I really enjoy your portrayal of him in this story. Also, the way you've identified and presented key themes to build believable characters and plot, like the contrast between Anakin's raw, overwhelming emotions and Obi-Wan's coolness due to their different childhoods, makes compelling reading. The insightful title should have cued me to the thoughtfulness that runs through this piece! Moreover, I really appreciated your rich, descriptive prose during the sex -- quite an accomplishment and a boon for your readers. Thank you for sharing and please keep writing, and I very much look forward to reading more :)
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  • From ANON - derlique on July 11, 2005
    The beginning is so very poingant, yet it forces me to click the link to the next chapter. This is an absoluetly wonderful story! I implore you to write more!
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  • From ANON - Winter on July 10, 2005
    I recommend you!

    Best Obi/Ani EVAR. Which I say with authority.
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  • From ANON - PixieDust on July 08, 2005
    Very well writen! I have enjoyed it so far and am looking forward to more. Can't really offer you any suggestions, just keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - xtina on July 08, 2005
    I love it. Usually I don't like Obi POVs but this one has reeled me in! You are staying true to both characters which I love. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - ImaPseudonym on July 08, 2005
    The first two chapters are very lovely. Easy paced, and insightful.
    I'm looking forward to reading Obi-Wan's response to Anakin's inevitable confession.
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  • From on July 08, 2005
    Ooo, this is very well written. I love the imagery. ^^ Can't wait to see more!
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