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By : LadyExcalibur
  • From ANON - shanobi on July 27, 2005
    Wow - what a delicious mixture of love and obsession. I was a bit worried at first, the age thing didn't bother me, but I'm not into non-con at all. Glad to see that isn't *really* the case here - though it could be argued.

    I will have to thank Adair for the fic rec - it was well worth checking out. I'm rooting for Obi to just fall for Xan and i'm rooting for Xan to just let him go - which I'm thinking that is what it's going to take for Obi to actually trust Xan and let him have his heart.

    But you threw a little curve ball in there with Obi's dream about Qui and calling out his name - just what is that supposed to mean? There seems to be a bond of sorts between Xan and Obi - but how will Qui complicate things?

    Absolutely love the sex, but am getting worried about the obsession part. Xan has been patient so far, but I sense it wont last. Poor Obi, so confused and drunk - and while I have to admit the opening sex scene was undeniably hot, I(personally) found it conflicting. Xan wanted Obi at any costs and did take advantage of him, but i'm over analyzing :) I'm enjoying and will be checking back for more whenever I can.

    Xan/Obi pairing is one of my faves, even tops Qui/Obi-so i'm thrilled to have found this. Great storyline. Keep up the good work.

    --shan
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  • From ANON - Lizzie on July 26, 2005
    Anything is possible... Hell, yeah!!!! .... sorry ^^'... I just love the way you writte, really, congratulations, I can´t wait for the next chapter ^_^
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  • From ANON - Loki on July 25, 2005
    Caught up to Chapter 8 - lovely fic! Xan's both a mean bastard and incredibly affectionate. But you had to throw Qui-Gon into it, didn't you!
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  • From ANON - Adair on July 20, 2005
    Loved this chapter. Xan was so deliciously scary in his possessiveness. But then who can blame him?
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  • From ANON - Lizzie on July 18, 2005
    Hi there! I´m so glad that you are updating really soon, Thanks!!! Because I´m really an addict of your story.... and now more than ever ^_^
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  • From ANON - Lizzie on July 11, 2005
    Hi!!! I love your fic, I really do, even if I i´m not a big fan of the Xan/Obi-wan pairing, I really enjoy reading your fic... please, continue with your great story!!!!
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  • From ANON - adair on July 10, 2005
    You're evil! Thanks to you and this delicious story, I've decided to expand on one of my Xanobi fics here. Loving this! Eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
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  • From Siarra on July 08, 2005
    This is such a good fic... I love the way you've managed to balance out the hot sex and the depth of their characters. Usually when reading these kinds of fics one gets the feeling that other is just the necessary evil but make it all come together very artfully. The development is also very good; it's clear that the time goes on but you don't make it seem hasty or draw it out unnecessarily, either. Now that Obi is starting to realize the nature of things, I'm sure things will get even better. Xanatos seems a bit off, in my opinion but love does funny things to people... It's just that now that he's stripped of his evil antics he has become a bit... dare I say nondescript?
    I'll be sure to come and check more of this lovely fic.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 08, 2005
    very new, very intersting! i`m looking forward to the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Loki on July 08, 2005
    You know you! I'm loving this story, you wonderfully dirty old lady. :D Very sweet scene, but who could blame Obi for giving in just a little bit more? I don't!
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  • From ANON - LadyExcalibur on July 07, 2005
    Thank you so much for all of the kind reviews. And I was deliberately vague as this will be a developing line in the story. There is a reason for this madness! Okay, a reason besides hot sex.
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  • From Siarra on July 07, 2005
    Wow, I really liked this fic. Usually the fics with this pairing are simple one-shots with a classically perverted and cheaply evil Xanatos but this one... It has plot and some real depth to it. It also sports a very good story flow, something I love in a good fic. And... It has some extremely hot and well written smut in it. I must admit, though, that I would like to have the setting a little less obscure; we know that Qui-Gon isn't around but there are other unanswered questions, especially about how Xan came to capture Obi since that comment about him spicing Obi's food didn't quite match how you started the story. Then again, it might be just me asking silly questions.
    I'm going to keep an eye on how this great story continues so I hope you'll update soon.
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  • From ANON - Taz on July 06, 2005
    Very hot. Exactly the sort of story that is my guilty pleasure, this semi-non-con, reluctant lover thing. Keep up the excellent work.
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  • From ANON - ImaPseudonym on July 01, 2005
    Guh.. Corrupted youth... Very.. VERY.. Nice.

    Of course, I do have an affinity for rooting for the.. 'bad guy'.
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  • From ANON - Angsty Freedom Fighter on July 01, 2005
    ^_^ Hey, wow, not bad! This is a first for me. The first time I've stumbled across a Xan/Obi fic where Xanatos didn't just screw our hapless Obi-Wan and leave laughing malevolently like always, this story looks to have a long and good plot [not that all the other fics with the said coupling aren't good; granted they're good too, but...a PLOT! A plot that goes beyond 'screw and run away'...!] Cheers!! I do hope that you continue this. You already have me hooked, heheh. I'll be rooting you on~! --Angst
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