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Reviews for An alternative fate

By : jaymclg
  • From ANON - PJ on July 06, 2005
    *whew fans self* this last chappie... was hot. not I want to be in a spaceship with those 2 do you think they would let me watch and participate? This is such a cool story and you are doing a great job writing this. I look forward to the next upate.
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  • From ANON - LadyVADAR on July 05, 2005
    Your lastest chapter was hot...wow! Let me just tell you which Im sure you've heard alot lately...I wait with bated breath for every chapter you post. I can't wait to read what happens next although I'm sure some angst is coming, poor anakin having four babies...ow! Please keep writing and the chapter where Padme died and told Anakin and Obi Wan to go ahead and love and live you made me cry! I adore any author's ability to make me feel the emotions
    of the chararacters oh and the sex was pretty hot too.

    toodles
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  • From ANON - cisco on July 03, 2005
    I read all 14 chapters today and I am relly happy I found this story. I like the relationship that is developing between Ani and Obi Wan. I look forward to reading future installments and can't wait to see where you are going with the story.
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  • From ANON - joey on July 03, 2005
    Hey this is a great story. A friend of mine suggested it to me. So I had to check it out. Its great. I was a bit surprised at the four kids but hey you have plans for them so keep writing. One thing while I like the idea of Obi-wan & Anakin having this "bond thingy" please don't get too carried away with them sending each other images, etc to me it seems to take a bit away from the story. I like that they can feel each other and can hear some thoughts if they are not careful but the images and stuff seems a bit much to me. I know you are trying to maybe put some fun into the story and that is great I guess it just isn't my thing. Still it is a great story and I am going to continue to read I am not flaming you just stating my opinion. Its a great story and I look forward to reading more.... and any sequel you may write you did mention those too. Again awesome story.
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  • From ANON - PJ on July 02, 2005
    LOL.... great chapter. I can just see and hear Obi-wan grumbling through the link and him thinking/scolding Anakin. Keep writing you are doing great.
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  • From ANON - PJ on July 02, 2005
    Nice update. This is a very intersting story. I am intrigued about you plans for the "four" I figured you had a reason for Anakin having four kids besides the twins. Keep writing.
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  • From ANON - Love to be Anon on July 01, 2005
    Aww, poor Ani! It's hard enough for a girl to have quadruplets, just think of what Ani will have to go through. And OBI-WAN will be the step-father of two and the father of four at fourty-something...talk about a mid-life crisis. But I know what you're doing...you're going to have the two repopulate the Jedi...I'd like to see you try!! Are the baby's names going to be like all 'L's or some such thing? Anyways, keep going.
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  • From ANON - Andante on July 01, 2005
    I started reading this story a little while ago and I was really getting into it, but to be honest I'm not too keen on the quadruplets plotline. It seems a bit over the top and I think it distracts from Obi Wan's and Anakin's relationship, and their special union. Anyway, just my two cents worth.
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  • From ANON - Phoenix Red Lion on June 30, 2005
    FOUR KIDS! WOW! That is DEFINITELY going to be a handful! Never say that coming. Though I was wondering who was going to get pregnant...with how Anakin came to being, anything was possible. And I really like how ya added that bit over the bound disappearing and reappearing. That really added more to the story and connected the chapters better.

    I was wondering though...Anakin was so angry over Padme's death when she died...how did he get over that anger. I was almost expecting him to go hunt down the Sith in the next chapter! So is the Sith going to make another appearance? They've been gone for quite a while now.

    Great job! Can't wait for the next update!
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  • From ANON - PJ on June 30, 2005
    Well this is interesting. But four? And how will they explain this to the council especially about Obi-wan and Anakin being together. Keep writing update soon
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  • From ANON - SetoKaibaWheeler *too lazy to sign in* on June 30, 2005
    haha, anakin is so in for it! i can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Mahie on June 29, 2005
    This is one of the best fics I've been following so far. It's so full of feeling, emotions...and as I said before, I love AUs in which Ani doesn't turn...if only it had been like that in the movie... *sigh* Your Ani is so noble, so wonderful. I can't wait to read more. I loved this last chapter with him and Obi making love. Please give us more of the hotness! ^__^
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  • From ANON - Phoenix Red Lion on June 28, 2005
    Wow! This is really good! I'm really enjoying this story line. I've always wondered how things could've been if Ani hadn't fallen to the dark side. The movie showed just how powerful a team Obiwan and Anikin could be.

    So far I've only had problems with your very, very long sentences (run on sentences - when there should be several sentences instead of just one). The grammar has made me cringe, but that is all.

    I am wondering though...is Obiwan still blocking his emotions from Ani? When he learned the truth, you showed that Ani was upset over it. Did he ever get the openness back? It was never clear if he did or when he did. Could you clarify that maybe?

    Keep up the great work! I'm an truly loving this story and can't wait for the next update!
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  • From ANON - Seylin on June 28, 2005
    It's so sad! -dabs eyes with a hankie-
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  • From on June 26, 2005
    how sweet! i can't wait for the next chapter!
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