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Reviews for The Darkness of Desire

By : courtier
  • From ANON - Dayast Joy on June 30, 2005
    I love the way you've captured young Anakin's restlessness and affectionate nature. I can just imagine him using the emergency code out of simple impatience. It's really sweet, in a non-sickening kind of way. Looking forward to your version of adult Anakin. Can't wait to read more :D
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  • From ANON - xtinagragg on June 29, 2005
    very good! pls update soon!
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  • From ANON - Seylin on June 28, 2005
    Ooooo... how interesting. Please continue soon.
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  • From ANON - SetoKaibaWheeler *too lazy to sign in* on June 26, 2005
    hurray! update! can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - Kira on June 26, 2005
    This is one of the best fanfics I've read ^o^ Please continue, I cannot wait for the next update!
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  • From on June 26, 2005
    Aww, how cute. This fic has totally killed me with cute. And angst. I really like how you didn't jump into the relationship... and I would hope so considering anakin's only 9 right now, lol.

    I'm looking forward to your next chapter!
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  • From on June 24, 2005
    :D You totally win at life. I love this story tons.

    (Omg, its scaryanakin! Wouldn't it be scary to have that dream? Eep)
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  • From ANON - Katherine on June 23, 2005
    Another wonderful chapter! ^^ I really like how you're building it up instead of just throwing the two together as I've seen in many other stories.
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  • From on June 23, 2005
    Hey, this story was really good so far!

    It was written alot better than ALOT of stuff I've read. You're a very good writer, and this story has certainly caught my attention. So much, I went and registered so I could write a review!

    :D

    Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Kathleen on June 22, 2005
    My god. Wonderful! Keep up the good work! ^.^
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  • From on June 22, 2005
    can't wait for more!!!!
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  • From PJBender on June 22, 2005
    Interesting!
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  • From ANON - Dayast_Joy on June 22, 2005
    This was a sweet story. I liked the way it begins with Anakin not even recalling Obi-Wan's name, and then he learns his future Master's name in a gentle exchange, making an astute observation about the latter's character in the process. I enjoy your prose, it brings together a lot of thematic threads in a precise, unfussy way. This is a promising first chapter in what I hope will be an O/A series. Hoping very much that you will write more, there isn't enough quality stories of this pairing out there, and your work is something I'd like to read. I'm sure I'm not alone :D Thank you for sharing!
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  • From ANON - VampireHermit on June 22, 2005
    I like it muchly! (Yes, I know "muchly" isn't really a word...) Continue, please?

    And I know this may sound weird, but thank you for using proper grammar and spelling. We can enjoy the plot without worrying over run-on sentences.
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  • From ANON - JW4ever on June 21, 2005
    Your idea to picture the relationship between them from the beginning is amazing. I'm aching to read a story like that. Please update asap.
    I can't get enough of Obi/Ani love. :-)
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