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Reviews for The Darkness of Desire

By : courtier
  • From on July 29, 2005
    Yes! And the slash begins to show.

    Anakin is so innocent. :3. I really like how you have Anakin often mention that Padme is beautiful, rather than shun her completely. When ever he mentions her I wanna give you a high five because it makes the idea of Obi-wan x Anakin so much more believable. I can't wait to read more.
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  • From on July 24, 2005
    Wow, so no pause? I'm always rereading my own stuff a billion times before I put it up. lol.

    Anyways, Obi-wan cares so much for Anakin, and when reading this (just the small details you write of them interacting as they both grow together) makes it really sad when you think: "Someday they'll become Darth Vader and Ben Kenobi."

    I like how you show how much Obi-wan cares for Anakin. I wouldn't be able to stay awake that long if you payed me. However, it's sad he can't stop thinking about Qui-gon... No one really realizes how depressed someone as (for some strange reason) emotional as Obi-wan would be. I'm glad to see someone remembers how important Qui-gon is to Obi-wan. Great job as always, I can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - ImaPseudonym on July 22, 2005
    Still an absolutely lovely story.
    This is, truly, a pleasure to read. I'm looking forward to future chapters.
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  • From jadeddiva on July 20, 2005
    This story is great! The pace is slow but it allows the relationship between the two to be fully developed. Update again soon!
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  • From ANON - xtina on July 18, 2005
    SSSOOOOO GOOD! I love that you are telling the story of the span of their relationship. I am completely hooked! Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Lilu on July 17, 2005
    This is one of the best Obi/Ani stories I have read.
    You have captured the emotional termoil, I belive is the heart of their relationship, very well.

    And my deprave slashy heart ís hoping for some well written, passionte love in the (not too far) future.
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  • From ANON - Erin on July 16, 2005
    Whee. To say that I love what you're doing with this story would be an understatement.
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  • From on July 16, 2005
    OH! That was my favorite chapter yet! Poor Anakin and Obiwan! Angsty emotions!!!

    T_T. Do you have this pretyped or do you type it up then post it? This story is truely amazing!

    Let's see, where to start... Obi-wan seems to be pretty torn over Anakin's question a few chapters ago. The poor guy... You really make me feel bad for him. With the way you had Anakin figure out he was all angsty, it made it really dramatic. Most people would just explain the emotions from Obi-wan's point of view or something, but Anakin finding out (and still not finding everything out) was clever and original.

    And when Anakin said "He understands... he cares", This was me: T_T
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  • From on July 12, 2005
    :D! I was so happy to see there was a new chapter. I am in so much love with this story!

    Poor Anakin, figures he would be jipped out of seeing his mum. I bet the Jedi Council did it on purpose, because they're such big fans of the original trilogy and want Anakin to turn to the darkside...

    Yay! This fic is like constant great character interaction; like angels decending down onto adultfanfiction.net singing one continuous high pitched note. Total love. Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - Dayast Joy on July 06, 2005
    Chapter 6 was beautiful! I loved the setting, with the quiet of sunset in the Temple contrasting with the sexually charged activity at the club. You've written Anakin so well, he's so very vulnerable, and yet so closed. Flustered Obi-Wan is precious, I can almost hear him. Please write more, your work is wonderful. Thank you for sharing, I'm really excited to see where this plot is headed. At the same time, I love your pacing and descriptive detail, so please don't rush it because you have so many eager readers ;D I'd like to savour every chapter!
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  • From ANON - Ija Ijevna on July 05, 2005
    I'm really curious how you will continue this story. So far I liked it very much, especially after I had read the prequel. What can I say? The pace is temperate (which is exactly how I prefer such stories;-) and the characterisation is convincing and believable, which - let me repeat myself - IS rare. Not to mention that it is also not easy. Congratulations, again. ;-D Don't keep us waiting very long, please.

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  • From on July 04, 2005
    You would never know how much I love this fic. It's so refreshing to find such a well written fic out there. Alot of stuff out there sucks. This fic is the only reason I come to this site anymore.

    You characterization is the best, I can really honestly feel for the characters. You should consider becoming a real author: You would totally kick ass.

    ... Eyes of Passion, huh? I am going to read it, I wouldn't pass up a chance to read more of your works. But first, I need sleep. It's six in the morning V_V
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  • From ANON - babydoll786 on July 03, 2005
    I liked this chapter it was very VERY amusing!!!
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  • From ANON - ImaPseudonym on July 03, 2005
    >The man’s lover was another man.< Dun dun dunn!

    i absolutely love the way you portray Obi-Wan. The mildly chastising, yet thoroughly compassionate, affectionately patient mentor. And Anakin's curiosity. *sighs* I wish I were half so decent at writing plot as you are.
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  • From on July 02, 2005
    LOL. Poor anakin. Poor Obiwan. Fanfiction is so mean to them.

    *Dead* I can't believe that couple was actually two guys, I seriously wasn't expecting that. Good Job, this chapter was awesome. I am really like the character interation and how you write their personalities. It's as if I can actually watch them in my mind.
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