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Reviews for Revenge

By : imaPseudonym
  • From ANON - Luna on June 30, 2005
    I really rea;;y like this... so, so, so good... aggghhh... the stories I like the best I can never really describe how much I like them... this is one of those times. I need more!!!

    P.S. if you still need a beta, I'd love to help... I'm a shockingly good beta, despite the poor syntax in most of my reviews...
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  • From ANON - xtina on June 30, 2005
    Soooo good! I hope you update soon! You are such a gifted writer!!
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  • From ANON - WhiteDestiny on June 30, 2005
    . . . SO GEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEWD! OMFG! *slams head against wall* This is just . . . GOSH DAMN IT! *shakes you* THIS SO GOOD! WASDJFKL:AWRIH PWEIR!!! Nglaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhh . . . GUhhhhhhhhhhhh . . . So, good, gosh, damn . . . it. I LOVE THIS!!!!!! MORE! OMFGMORE! Liek . . . I need it. XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD *thumbs up for you* Amazing job with the fic!

    . . . Wow, look at all the exclamation marks.
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  • From ANON - raffyne on June 28, 2005
    This is AMAZING! I mean, what a great fic. I love how Anikan can't decide whether to kill Obi or fuck him! I cant wait to see what happens next!
    XD
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  • From ANON - GB on June 26, 2005
    omg! update again real soon! *laughs* you are doing an awesome job. i'm so glad i decided to check today and see if you updated. *grins* keep up the good work. and last time i check omitance was a word, or at least i thought it was, you just spelled it wrong, that's all. Well, i'm looking forward to the next part. *smiles* got to go. BYE-BYE!!
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  • From PJBender on June 26, 2005
    I'm still enjoying this. There are a few small errors; missing words and punctuation, nothing drastic. I hate nitpicking though, so I won't comb through the whole piece. I am kind of troubled by your closing notes. You give us previews (which is great!), but then you add "should anyone wish it". That makes me sad. You should write the story if you want. Don't wait for people to tell you to write more. There are readers, plenty of them, who don't like being made to feel like they have to say something in order to keep enjoying.

    The council would sense all of this.. My own weakness, and selfishness at not accepting his death. To let myself, a Jedi for Force sake!, be dominated by a self-proclaimed Sith.. and fantasize that he was my master.

    I loved that line. It sums up perfectly why this story is so kinky! :)
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  • From ANON - Zikiya on June 26, 2005
    Refreshingly different. I look forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - xtina on June 25, 2005
    this is my current favorite fic!! Please update it soon because I will be checking for the next chapter every day until it gets here!!!
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  • From ANON - WhiteDestiny on June 25, 2005
    ... OMFG!!!! So good! SOOOOOO GOOOD! This is just... wow. WOW, WOW, WOOOOOOOOW! aleirhawlera!!!!! rwleirlerwer!!Aihfelir!!! AWjfasdlfhea! ASDFJKLADFJKL:! So much incoherency! XD Anyway, CONTINUE! :D

    However, I am a bit confused with how Anakin is in the past. Is Anakin really all better and walking through the past and messing it up? Or... is he crazy? :P But, eh, I'm sure you will answer all these questions as you post more chapters! ^^ And besides, the smut banishes all these questions so I really shouldn't be asking/complaining! *slaps self*

    *takes a deep breath* I LOVE YOU!!!! Please continue omfg.
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  • From ANON - Ann on June 25, 2005
    A very interesting story, well written. Looking forward to the next chapter! :-)
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  • From ANON - Pear on June 24, 2005
    Good work can't wait for the next chapter!!!

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  • From PJBender on June 24, 2005
    I regret not having gotten around to this chapter sooner. Well written smut, huzzah!
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  • From ANON - Stoney on June 22, 2005
    So, uh, yeah. I'm waiting for some more. I'd like to read the Obi-Wan POV to see what it was that led him to allow the forced (in the beginning) sex.

    Waiting.... Waiting....
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  • From ANON - Kang-Ling on June 21, 2005
    Ooooohhhh! * Raises hand*

    I very much desire for this fic to continue!

    *Makes it into a wish list*

    1) I also want more smut, of a more consensual and kinky way!

    Please continue!



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  • From ANON - Legolas19 on June 20, 2005
    ummm yummy, I loved this chapter.
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