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Reviews for The Nurse and the Assassin.

By : PJBender
  • From ANON - Dru on June 14, 2005
    "Anakin understood why Obi-wan had wanted to come to the nursery. Not only was this probably the closest he’d been to a woman’s breast since he himself was weaned, but she touched you as well."

    This line made me laugh out loud! Good job so far. Looking forward to the rest of it. Though I really hope you aren't going to have Anakin/Vader go all soft and let Siti get away. It would kind of take the dark out of the entire destruction of Jedi scenes in ROTS. But then, maybe that's what you're going for? I guess everyone deals in their own way. Either way, nice story.

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  • From ANON - Tara on June 14, 2005
    Finally, a new story that is worth reading! Love the imagery and the feel of the entire piece. You've captured the mood wonderfully. The only thing I would change, and this is only because The Simpsons are so imbedded in my head, is when Anakin thinks 'Exellent' to himself. All I can hear is Mr. Burns voice and see him rubbing his hands together ;-) But in the grand scheme of things and compared to some of the other poorly researched and written stories out there, that's just a tiny personal thing LOL. Can't wait for more of this. Keep up the good work!
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