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By : Chriscent
  • From ANON - Morgana on July 08, 2005
    I mean 4 and 5. ;-)
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  • From ANON - Morgana on July 08, 2005
    Chapter 5 and 6 are the same.
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  • From ANON - Britomartis on July 07, 2005
    I really like this fic. I haven't seen a Riddick Fic before, and this really is awesome. I think you're playing everything just right, Riddick is the asshole-with-a-well-hidden heart that I saw in the films, and I like the OC a lot.

    Great job, looking forward to reading more.

    ~Bri
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  • From ANON - Death on July 07, 2005
    I love your fanfic and all.....But this is the same chapter as chapter 4...................................ya........Update soon! >_< I want to know what happpens!
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  • From ANON - yelsha4 on July 06, 2005
    very well written and it flows nicely for the reader. you keep your characters in character (much appreciated) and make the story believable. i love the little scientific details and observations mentioned here and there throughout the story. i hope you continue this fic, i'm hooked.
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  • From ANON - Death on July 01, 2005
    I hope you update soon. This fanfic is soo cool! lol! Please update soon! I can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From ANON - munchkin on June 16, 2005
    I'm pretty new to AFF. This story caught my eye. I don't normally like stories that add characters to an established script. (Adding charcters after the fact doesn't bother me.) So, since this was changing the original plot, I wasn't too sure I would care for it. The main reason I even read it was because I have read some of the stories you have posted on other sites and enjoyed them greatly.

    After reading it, I have to tell you, I like this story - A LOT! I think you have a superb writing style. I can almost feel Bell's exhaustion and fear. You definitely have a flare for drawing the reader into your world. Keep up the good work.

    I hope to see much more of this story soon. I can't wait to see what they find at the settlement and if John's comes after them!

    Munchkin


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  • From ANON - Caz on June 14, 2005
    Nice! Can't wait for the next chapter. Tough bitch our Bella is. :)
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  • From ANON - yarvarni on June 14, 2005
    still enchanted with this! Can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - yarvarni on June 12, 2005
    I am loving this. Can't wait for more! I like your take on Jack. And I really like Bell
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 10, 2005
    Please write more!
    PLEASE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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