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Reviews for Treacherous

By : Chriscent
  • From ANON - Death on August 28, 2005
    OMG! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I twist in the plot! I thought I felt one comeing! ^_~ lol! I'm so happy your not ending it cause I love this fic and I want to see what happens! ^_~
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  • From ANON - Biokinetic on August 27, 2005
    O_OYes! You updated. I love this chapter. I had a gut feeling that Bell and Ram were eventually going to have sex. It kinda sounds like Ram is jealous of Riddick, and its kinda making me suspicious how he's acting now he finds out that Bell if furyan and so is her baby..O.o I hope he doesn't rat them out. That would really suck lol.
    This is really original..I like how you added the little twist here in this chapter where we learn Bell knew Riddick from when they were children. I wonder if he remembers. I hope you elaborate this further in the future, because I find these little details you weave into your story really interesting and what makes it even better is that they're believable.
    Im kinda disappointed that Riddick didn't come in during this chapter, but it was still progressive and eventful so Im happy :XD
    I hope you update again soon, I was panicking there for awhile because it was around..two weeks I think? I dunno, it seemed that long lol. I thought you had stopped writing this story. Pleasseee update soon?-puppy eyes-
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  • From ANON - Targon on August 21, 2005
    Hey!

    Just finished your Story... What can I say, great writing! I really enjoyed reading this. *smirk*
    I just wanted to ask if there's a sequel... or at least information what became of Bell and her unborn child. *grin*

    Greetings, Targon
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  • From ANON - BlurryFuture on August 19, 2005
    Shit...awesome story!!! Yupps, this is my favorite Pitch Black fanfic. Is this the last chapter?? Or is there more to come??Sequel?
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  • From ANON - keyonnamc on August 16, 2005
    Oh my god…you have to update this quick and soon. I’m about to burst. I need to know where this will all lead.
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  • From ANON - Death on August 15, 2005
    Ok. I loved it like all ways. But why does everyone think that Jack and Kyra are 2 differnt girls. Kyra is jack. She just changed her name. I just thought I might tell you. Cause I don't get that everyone gets confused with that. Anyhow. Please update soon! I got to see what happens next!
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  • From ANON - Biokinetic on August 15, 2005
    Brilliant update...I love this story to DEATH and the fact that its one of the few Pitch Black/Riddick fics being frequently updated just makes me love it even more! I love how you began to liven up the plot instead of ending the story there by making Bell pregnant. I only hope you don't make Bell go and be pathetic and have her tell Riddick about her baby lol
    It would be so awesome if he had to find out for himself..after all...I do feel bad for Bell. I love the character you made..please update soon.

    Your Faithful Reader,
    Chess
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  • From ANON - Macheil on August 13, 2005
    Wonderful,excellant,exciting! Thanks for the story
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  • From ANON - Death on August 04, 2005
    SO ROCKED! lol! that's not the end is it? I hope not. Please update soon! I can't wait to see what happens next! ^_~
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  • From ANON - Nicole on August 04, 2005
    I just love this story. You should jurry up and post the next chapter because I can't wait for the next one.
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  • From ANON - yarvarni on August 04, 2005
    Oh good we got Jack, Imam and the critters are about to take care of Carolyn and not Bell :-)
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  • From ANON - Death on August 03, 2005
    LOVED IT! Please update soon! So rocked! I hope jonhs dies. I hate him. He's mean. >_< lol! ^_~
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  • From ANON - yarvarni on August 02, 2005
    I know I say this everytime but I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Death on August 01, 2005
    Oh no. They can't all be dead, can they? Damn. Update soon! I got to see what happens next! ^_~
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  • From ANON - Death on July 28, 2005
    OH YA! lol! That so rocked! Please update soon! I can't wait to see what happens next! ^_^
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