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Reviews for Treacherous

By : Chriscent
  • From evilgrin on January 25, 2006
    Just started this story, after reading a couple of your shorts. You have a great writing style, and I look forward to reading the rest of the story
    xxxevilgrinxxx
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  • From ANON - Rin on January 21, 2006
    Shit. This has got to be one of the best Riddick stories I have ever read. I started reading this a long time back, and have just now found it again. I am so glad to see that you had updated. I beg of you to please update again soon. I NEED to know what happens next. That was one of the best cliff-hangers I've seen in a while. If you can, please e-mail me to tell me when you have updated. I cant wait. Keep up the great work!
    -Rin
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  • From ANON - crystal on January 21, 2006
    More,more please
    I love this story!
    Update soon
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  • From Evanscent on January 18, 2006
    Interesting. I enjoy your style, not to mention the content. I'm heavily attracted to the fact you maintain Riddick's dark and stormy appeal and really do adore your OC, Bel. It's not "love and first sight," or anything incredibly romantic, but the love of two people who are lost in a world to which they don't exactly belong. I like how you include the jargon specific to the genre, sounding almost like it was swept from the movie itself. Also, I'm impressed with your ability to show the passage of time without the need for interruptions and notes. This is good! I look forward to reading more. I'll be watching. -Keely
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  • From ANON - Teri on December 20, 2005
    Amazing! I love this story. Different take on PB from any others i've read. I love how you make Riddick human without making him too emotional or whimpy. I also like how Bell accepts him and doesn't turn into a love struck begging female. I'd love to see you write more like this and False Dawn!
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  • From ANON - Aurora on November 01, 2005
    OMG ... This if Awesome!! update soon please and let me know when you do. Much love from your fan=Me.
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  • From ANON - Hanako on October 26, 2005
    Wasn't sure I'd like it, but I got sucked in. Good stuff. I know the writing's hard sometimes, but I (and at least fifty others #grins#) would appreciate an update soon.
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  • From ANON - Crystal on October 12, 2005
    great story!!
    update soon plz
    and some more sex scenes,...not with the bot!
    lol
    Crystal
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  • From ANON - sheri on October 04, 2005
    Please, please finish the story, I love the way you captured the Riddick characters
    personality. I enjoy good writing and you show talent and imagination.

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  • From ANON - possum on September 18, 2005
    DAMN you're good! I love this story! Excitedly awaiting the next installment....
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  • From ANON - Death on September 17, 2005
    Loved it so much! I so happy you updated! ^_~ I got to see what happens next! Update soon!
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  • From ANON - sam on September 17, 2005
    Holy crap, this story is a jewel. Bella is a wonderful character, and that's not even close to an idle compliment. Nothing that I can think of makes her too perfect, or too annoying. You also seem to have gotten Riddick in pretty damn near perfect character. Now for my compliments on the best part - the sex. ^_^ Perfect. Too often I find myself reading stories where Riddick all but rapes a woman, and she's all, "I love it." It's disgusting. You did it beautifully, keeping Riddick Riddick, while not making him a dominant ass. You seem to have created a character that is a perfect compliment to his impossible personality. ^_^
    I laughed so hard as both of them though about what the previous captain used Ramses for. So hard. ^_^ I do wish you had put in Riddick's "Beautiful," comment, but I honestly can't complain.
    I'm very happy with how Bell delt with Riddick running off to crash himself on a Godforsaken ice planet, but Jack and Kyra upruptly running off made me sad... And now you have me on the edge of my seat wondering what happened to Bella and Riddick's kid. I cannot wait till your next update. You are amazing. Monty Python and the Holy Grail is amazing. This story is amazing. The amount of money I wouldn't give to have been Bella is amazing.

    Say the word, and I'll go and review the other 18 chapters, but at the moment, I'll just leave you with me begging for you to continue.
    ~sam~
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  • From ANON - keyonnamc on September 15, 2005
    I love the update. I want to know were Ramsey is? What happened to the baby she was carrying? What did she see to make her scream? I can't wait for and update.
    ../_/
    .(^_^)
    ()()()()
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  • From ANON - yarvarni on September 15, 2005
    soooooooooooooo happy to see an update! Awesome!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 15, 2005
    I don't mind waiting for it, cuz it's that good.....
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