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Reviews for Treacherous

By : Chriscent
  • From ANON - butterflydragon on February 14, 2006
    Hmm...I'm a little confused here by the shift in the story--although I'm ecstatic that there is actually a plot here, and a damn good one too! You shift from Bell's POV before the movie, to Riddick's after, and there's little to connect the two. What happened to Bell and Ramsey and Jack and Kyra and the kid in the intervening time? I'm so confused, but it looks like you might be tying them together near the end of this last chapter. Keep it up, and I'll keep reading!
    ~b.d.
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  • From ANON - Dee on February 09, 2006
    You are a gifted wrighter. I understand what you mean about it having to 'feel' right. I really like this story. I hope you continue with it.
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  • From ANON - meekster on February 07, 2006
    Yay I am so happy that you updated although, i love this story. Whats going on with Bella ? where is the child? does she have any special abilities? If Jack and Kyra were two different people where the heck is Jack. So many questions that I am dying to have answered. Please update soo.!!!
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  • From ANON - tripleS aka SSS on February 05, 2006
    this rocks so far. i really like it. and i love the chronicles of riddick -- i cannot really remember pitch black. I LOVE VIN DIESEL! lol
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  • From evilgrin on February 04, 2006
    as it appears we may never see TCoR 2 and 3, maybe you'll do the honour and write us a fitting end?
    I'm not averse to a little begging, provided there's a return :-D
    xxxevilgrinxxx
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  • From ANON - Yarvarni on February 04, 2006
    I was so happy to see an update to this! I LOVE this fic! Please keep up the great work!
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  • From Evanscent on February 04, 2006
    I happen to like this story. However, as an author, I understand your pains. It takes me weeks to merely be satisfied with the idea that I can't write it any better. Not to say it cannot be done better, but just not in my hands. I'd like to inform you that this was done well and without cause for qualms. I am also completely new to the Riddick genre... so my opinions of his origins and potential are ignorant: all seems well to me! I urge you to continue, even if you think your chapters are below par; an artist is always their own worse critic. Remember: this is your story. You get to do what you want with it. No boundries. No limits. I look forward to more chapters. Seriously.

    -Keely
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  • From ANON - Rin on February 02, 2006
    Very good chapter, kinda random, but i'm sure this is all leading somewhere. I will be looking for the next chapter :D. Keep up the great work!!!
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  • From ANON - eryn on February 02, 2006
    Great chapter! Love the slamdog bit I could really see Riddick doing that just to see her jump. It's great to see you working on this one agian.
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  • From ANON - sheri on February 02, 2006

    Very good I wish you would continue, you got me hooked since the first chapter, You
    captured the Riddick character well. I waited a long time for this new chapter.
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  • From evilgrin on February 01, 2006
    oh, the 'what the hell do I do with this story NOW?" dilemna has you in it's grips, C.
    well, for whatever the fuck it's worth, I like yer story.
    as fer the TCoR stuff?
    it's your world
    if it doesn't fit with what you want, you don't have to add it.
    I'm a Pitch Black girl, all the way, never much knew where to go with it, with TCoR, especially when i don't see any more sequels anytime soon.
    If it gives you a fat head and makes you happy, i like yer writing just fine, as any look at my recommended reading list will attest to
    take care
    xxxevilgrinxxx
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  • From ANON - Toxic on January 26, 2006
    WOW!!!! Brilliant! Well set out and all that jazz. Fabity-abity-doo!
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  • From ANON - caz on January 26, 2006
    okay, its now 3am and i'm sleepy. Update. :D
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  • From ANON - caz on January 26, 2006
    oof. on chapter 12.. .probably one of the single most funky sex scenes ever... just... wow.
    Okay, back to reading.
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  • From evilgrin on January 25, 2006
    "He was like a poem, hard to read and understand, but still able to stop a person in their tracks by the simple beauty of it."

    one hell of a nice way to put it, C.
    I'm impressed
    xxxevilgrinxxx
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