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Reviews for This is the night that you will always remember...

By : Stina
  • From chiisuchan on April 16, 2009
    i'm nearly crying... what an end!
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  • From ANON - bryan on December 31, 2006
    *blinks* wow...that makes me want to find MY boyfriend and try a little roleplaying....I'm not even kidding you....damn you're good at this stuff!
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  • From ANON - sharice on December 10, 2006
    i must say that i really liked this story. i never liked slash stories but you have inspired me to write my own. i think that you well written the story and i think that you did capture jacks character very well. i just wanted to say good job and well done mate.
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  • From ANON - clantb75 on November 21, 2006
    Very good story. I love the detail.Very passionate story. I hope you write a second part.
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  • From ANON - Mandey on August 08, 2006
    That was pretty darn good. You kept it going for a long time, too...I have longevity problems when it comes to writing fanfiction. Kudos to you. :)
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  • From ANON - Jessica on July 29, 2006
    I absolutely adored this entire story! I was laughing and crying right along with Will and Jack, who you captured character wise very well!! To say the least it's tough for me to decide if Elizabeth/Will is best, or if Jack/Elizabeth is better; needless to say, I much prefer to cut Elizabeth from the picture and pair Jack and Will together lol. ^.^ Although realisticaly we all know that it will never happen in the movies, which is why I adore fanfics SO much!

    You did an amazing job with your story and I hope you write another Jack/Will(And if you already have and I'm behind, I will make sure to find and read it!) Keep up the great job, you're a fantastic author!!

    XxJessXx
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  • From ANON - musashden on July 28, 2006
    Wow that was the best, most, plot I have ever seen in a slash fic. You're an excellent writer, usually I loose interest in long stories but I read this all the way through. The ending was kind of sappy but what the hell, I liked it. But it's 5:30 a.m. where I am so I must sleep. Tah!
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  • From ANON - RandomJackass on July 14, 2006
    Well, a few things
    First of all, thank you SO much for updating, it's really appreciated. The sex was really good, but I fel like it was a bit predictable. I felt like the descriptions were a bit haphazard. Finally, I didn't feel that any of Jack or Will's personality came out. And Captain Jack Sparrow simply has too much dignity to all his boyfriend "Baby". Whelp? Sure. Love? Yes. William darling dearest? Eh, with a few bottles of rum. But baby? Ohhhhhh noooooooo. And WHAT's with all the crying? I am all for emo pirates, but that was a bit much. All in all, better in quality than most, but not the best either. I still enjoyed reading it.
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  • From ANON - ??? on July 14, 2006
    what happend to Elizabeth? Did she not care what happend to Will? or Babosir? What about the pearl!? Love the romance though these two needed someone...Georgia has a port...where is goergia?(failed geography)
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  • From CassandraMalfoy on July 09, 2006
    Excellent story!
    I loved reading it.
    Will/Jack! OTP!
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  • From ANON - Stina on December 07, 2005
    Thank you all sooo much for your lovely reviews - they were so nice and encouraging (esp. the long one from Deluwiel, thank you a LOT!:)))) I donīt know what happened, but two reviews vanished yesterday. I did not delete them (why should I?) so I guess it is some technical problem. So if the ones who wrote the reviews read this here- I read your reviews and was very happy about them - donīt know where they disappeard to... :-(
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  • From ANON - Purgy on November 26, 2005
    Omg, that was wonderful. I stayed up till three am reading it. Couldn't stop. I applaud you.
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  • From ANON - Deluwiel on November 17, 2005
    I have read many, many stories of Will/Jack and I have also written a few, but I must say this is only the second one that has brought me to tears. The first time Will tells Jack he loves him, that really tugged at the heart strings. At the end of Chapter 11, I balled my eyes out. You really have a way with words there. That was just so sad. I never looked to see how many Chapters there were, I just kept reading, not wanting to know how much more there would be or if it was the end for them. Very well written. You captured the pain, the love, the lust, the glory, the sadness and happiness with such imagery and emotion. I could feel their pain and their tears and as I said it brought me to tears. When they cried, I cried. Happy and sad tears. The love scenes were very erotic and not smutty as some I have read. You kept it beautiful with meaning and the great visions you put in my head, well, let's just say Ooh la la!! This was one hell of an emotional roller coaster of a ride for me, and I enjoyed every minute of it.
    Keep up the good work. I hope to read some more of your stories.
    Thank you for keeping it real.

    Deluwiel
    xxxx

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  • From ANON - Miya Sparrow on November 16, 2005
    *tears* *snif* oh that was so...so...ah!!!!!!! great! I almost cried, almost but didn't! oh they are so sweet!!!!!!!!!!! god why can't they really be like that!? *shakes head* reality sucks ahahahaa
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  • From ANON - cocoyasha on November 15, 2005
    I've read up to the latest chapter of this fic and have a few comments to make. First of all I'd like to say this was a interesting experience for me to read 'cues I usually dont tend to read ficlets with whips, chains and spanking. Bondage isn't new for me, but still. It was pretty good actually, though I must admit the spanking wasn't all to my liking, or at least not the way it was writen. Secondly I'd like to say that I dont mean to be harsh in criticing you, but I'm sorry love; no matter what origion you have MEN DO NOT PRODUCE THEIR OWN LUBRICANT. I'm sorry, but unless both of them just happen to be insain genetic sports, there is no way Will's anal virginity could have been broken without severe pains in his rectal cavity to the point that he would more then likely attempt to beat jack horrible because he physically could not have gotten any pleasure out of that. Also, it would have taken Jack at least 10 minutes to sucessfully penedrate him scence he had no means to excellerate in him all by his cocks lonesome. Furthermore, I was very glad to see that you added lube and excersizing later on, but still... first time anal sex is pretty much impossible without lube @_@. Anyways, other then that I enjoyed reading your fic (though I am kinda pissy at some other small things in this story, but those are just my personal tweaks when it comes to relationships and how you portray them, they aren't physically inpossible so I wont add to my rant against you any more then I already have ^^""") and am still looking forward to your next chapter~>
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