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Reviews for Nights of Babylon

By : kruemel
  • From ANON - lucious on June 09, 2005
    dear kruemel~ thank you very much for the wonderful story, I have to say you are very talented, this story is so cool, it's getting more and more interesting!!!!! -> I can't help but check this site out twice a day to see if there is any update and it always make me soooooo happy to see an update (so please do more often, pretty pleaseeeee~~ ^___^)

    oh! Serena? hmmm she was just a real hunter I guess.. it's just that the way she thinks of her pray make me lost my appetite for meat ^^;;;

    anyway, I'm really impressed by Alexis's tenderness to Heph.. I really can't imagine how Alexander will be able to win Heph back, but is it possible for an incubus and human to live together? ahhhh you torture me for let me wait, I'm dying for moreeeee~~~
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  • From ANON - Alexdcl on June 09, 2005
    Ohhh, update again, very good
    I like this fic, I love him,
    finally alejandro will see that it can lose to hephaestion
    (if it is that the has no longer lost it)
    Me (as good Latin), I like the "melodrama"
    and it seems that now it is that it will begin
    Ohhh, I like this fic

    Update soon, please
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  • From ANON - Lucifer on June 09, 2005
    wonderful!*ç* I love this chap..I hope Alexis would kick Alexander ass!*°*
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  • From ANON - Queendel on June 08, 2005
    Really nice and interesting update .....but King Alexander was behaving like a spoilt child. It says a lot about Alexander's character when he allows pride to overshadow his love for Heph, and he has to get drunk before he could apologise for his bad behaviour.

    I am pleased that you wrote a Heph who was strong, resolute and had some backbone. I admire his behaviour at dinner and how he refused to spar with the King and walk away, even though it hurt him to do so. I know that Heph loves Alexander, but I never like him being weak and submissive to him, especially when Alexander is behaving like an arrogant, self-centered, idiotic tyrant. Alexander should love and respect Heph instead of taking him forgranted. I hope he learns his lesson before Alexis takes Heph love from him forever.

    Like the tenderness, care and adoration that Alexis is showing to Heph, and how Heph self-confidence and self esteem is blooming.

    Alexander let Bagoas ride his horse to hurt Heph but Alexis took Heph flying with him to show his appreciation of him and to make him happy.....what a difference in how both of these men treat Heph!!!

    I am curious as to whose golden orbs, Alexander is looking into: Are there Alexis, Tessos or Serena.

    Please update quite soon.
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  • From ANON - lucious on June 07, 2005
    Such a wonderful updates, this story getting more and more interesting!! (thinking about what Serena said int he last chapter almost make me decide to be vegeterian, can you believe it? ^^;;) I'm glad Alexis really care for Heph, he really deserve someone better than Alexander.. well, I really love Alexander/Hephaistion relationship but I just can't help upset with the way Alexander treated Hephaistion, either from the movie, this fic or many others... I'm dying for more now, please update soon~~!!!!! =)
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  • From ANON - midnghteyes on June 06, 2005
    Really good story...... Love the story line!! Can't wait to read more!!!!
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  • From ANON - Queendel on June 06, 2005
    Another very nice chapter.

    I hope that Alexis is not hurt by the others and that, if necessary, he can protect himself and Heph. I like the sex between Alexis and Heph and how tender he tries to be.

    I hope that this Alexander feels the pain of losing Heph after his cruel and hurtful behaviour.
    Update again soon as I eagerly look forward everyday to seeing an update.
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  • From ANON - Queendel on June 04, 2005
    Thanks for a quick and great update.

    I knew that poor Heph would be in pain the next day, and I guess so far he handled his secret well.
    I am glad that he refused Alexander, as he is too selfish and self-centered and he does takes Heph love and devotion for granted. Alexander seems to be of the view that Heph will not strayed as he will desire and love no one else, but him. Well, he is going to be in for a great surprise, and it is a good thing that he has no power over Alexis and that Alexis can protect Heph. Let Alexander go back to his clingly catamite, as right now they deserve each other.

    I do not know if the relationship between Heph and Alexis will last , but if Heph and Alexander get back together it should be on mutual terms where Alexander shows Heph the same love, devotion and respect instead of acting like an arrogant male pig, who thinks that having sex is the answer to every problem.

    Looking forward to your next update.

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  • From ANON - Lucifer on June 04, 2005
    I like this chap so much!*°* You're a very good writer!^____^
    I don't speak spanish but it's like italian in some ways..I think "Que a Bagoas se lo coma Tessos" means something like "Bagoas has the same demonic nature of Tessos"..
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  • From ANON - Queendel on June 03, 2005
    WOW!!! This was so HOT, so erotic and had me so on edge that I too climaxed *smile*.

    Awesome chapter. I like how Alexis battled his darker side and won, how he claimed his mate and his mate allowed such a claim. The sex was really steaming. Alexis claws are a bit much though as he will be unable to prepare Heph well, and will always tear his skin when touching him, especially in the grips of passion. Heph pain treshold must be very high.

    But our problem now is how Heph is going to explain the state of his mattress which has been destroyed but even moreso............. the state of his body......with its many marks, scrapes, cuts and bruises. I am sure that he will also be unable to lay with Alexander again any time soon after that sexual session, as his anus must be in a very stressful state after taking the length and girth of Alexis in such a deep and hard mating. BTW, will Heph be able to get up and walk after that?

    Very eagerly looking forward to your next chapter. I hope you update every day.


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  • From ANON - Ishkibibbles on June 03, 2005
    this story is fucking awesome.......can't wait till your next update.
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  • From ANON - diana on June 03, 2005
    omg,omg I so want to find out what happens next. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - alexdcl on June 03, 2005
    I was waiting the whole day to read this chapter
    oh man, I cannot wait to read the next chapter
    when will make an appearance Alejandro?
    I cannot hope to see he will make when the one sees the condition of Hephaestion
    will you update soon? please???

    PD: por esto te escribo en español, soy muy mala para redactar en inglés
    PD2: that Tessos feeds of Bagoas next time, or something similar?

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  • From ANON - midnghteyes on June 03, 2005
    This is a very interesting story... Wild ideal... I like it.. Keep going!!
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  • From ANON - Alex on June 02, 2005
    Hola, no sabes como he disfrutado tu historia. No puedo esperar a conocer la reacción de Alexander cuando se entere que Hephaestion disfruto de algo de acción esa noche y que el no participo (jajaja). Actualiza pronto, por favor.

    PD: Que a Bagoas se lo coma Tessos
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