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Reviews for Council Room Sex

By : icejadeus
  • From jme24576 on October 21, 2012
    I love this story! Also, I know that this is supposed to be an interlude for your other story "bringing balance" & I just wanted to say that I REALLY REALLY hope you add more to the other fic (especially a chapter that goes into their bonding ceremony)! Please please don't give up on the other fic! Thanks.
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  • From ANON - Sam on June 18, 2005
    *snicker* I love the last part.
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  • From ANON - Ida on June 06, 2005
    I did enjoy the rewrite, I must say:) The further explication of Obi's frustration at the beginning was much appreciated:) I prefer the original ending, though. I like the idea of Yoda being able to hold one over Obi and Ani's heads...kind of like a dirty little secret that only the green muppet is aware of. Ah well. I enjoyed. Thanks for posting the "Special Edition."
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  • From ANON - Cassidy on June 02, 2005
    *laughing uncontrollably*
    uh-oh!
    busted!
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  • From ANON - cat on May 31, 2005
    Great fic! People need to write more anakin/obi-wan. Speaking of that , do you know of any fanarts for that pairing? If so i'd love to see em'. Heres my email yo: cat_mazikins@yahoo.com

    Loved your fic!
    Cat
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  • From ANON - Salleh on May 30, 2005
    Sooo damn good.
    I wont be able to watch any sceen in the movie with that chair the same again..in a good way *wink*
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  • From India on May 28, 2005
    Wow. That was really hot-if any Jedi would know what was going on it would be Yoda. Poor Ani and Obi!

    I thought this was really wonderful, well done.
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  • From ANON - Ida on May 28, 2005
    This was very cute. I've always been a sucker for Yoda's teasing:) After seeing the rating for this story (and your other ones), I thought I'd drop you a review. Your premise and story are well written, but I believe you might get more positive feedback if you find yourself a beta reader. Your spelling is decent, but some of your grammar is a bit "off" for lack of a better word. I can also see a few problems with tense in several sentences. I've read some of your other work as well, and am particularly interested in your "Jedi and the Senator" bit, but have noticed errors there as well. You have some very promising ideas, and I can't wait to see where your stories will go, but I do hope you'll consider my advice and find yourself a beta. The Star Wars fandom alone has a massive list of people willing to assist, and another pair of eyes will without doubt improve your work. You deserve 5 star ratings, and you'll likely get them once you clean up a bit. Besides that, you're one of the better authors on here, with interesting ideas. Good luck with your writing, I hope to see more soon:) ~Cheers
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  • From ANON - Suzanne on May 28, 2005
    Oops, I posted the review for this story on He Couldn't sorry. But as I said in the review. I found the end very funny when Yoda hinted that he knew all the fantasies the had played out in the council room the night before. Also that I felt the council member definately needed the read and practice the book the Joy's of Sex. lol.

    ;P
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  • From ANON - sapphirexkat2 on May 28, 2005
    excellent story. please write more!
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  • From ANON - Dek-Mae on May 28, 2005
    lmao that was sexy yet funny. Naught Anakin lmao good going!
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