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Reviews for The Rescuer

By : SorinKain
  • From ANON - Anthony on February 11, 2006
    A very interesting story, but it would be easier to read if you started a new paragraph after each character finished speaking. I'm definetly looking forward to your next update.
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  • From ANON - Naryan on October 23, 2005
    Dude, this seriously has to be one of the best fics I have read, period. Id does sound like you are having a bit of trouble with english grammar. Is English your first language? I've helped a few people out with grammar before, and if you'd like, I would be glad to review your work and help you out with anything you may not be familiar with. Once again, amazing, incredible fic, and I dearly hope you continue it.
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  • From ANON - Naryan on July 25, 2005
    Please keep Going!!! This story is great, and I want to read more about it!! Great plot, good characters, and you must have a great beta reader since I havn't noticed a single mistake in grammer, punctuation, spelling, etc. Keep up the great work!!
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  • From ANON - Rena on June 24, 2005
    Its good to see that other people hated seeing her die as much as I did.

    Good writing, though the massive paagraphs are alittle hard on the eyes. Apart from that minor gripe, nothing else to moan about!

    Keep it up, at leadt, when your computers back up again.

    Oh BTW Vertigo, would you happen to like Ghost in the Shell: Stand Alone Complex?
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  • From SorinKain on June 22, 2005
    Im sorry guys, My computer is on the fritz, so im posting this on a friends computer to let you all know that its on hold until I can get the problem fixed. and I promise those of you that are wanting to wack off that you will be able to soon. I was writing up the sex scene when the computer died on me. But I promise you all that I will have it up as soon as the computer decides its given me enough crap.
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  • From ANON - cooldoom on June 20, 2005
    is there going to be sex?
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  • From ANON - Sithy on June 14, 2005
    If there is no update soon, I will be forced to kill you.

    J/k, seriously though, can we have an update soon?
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  • From ANON - KuroiRuy on June 13, 2005
    Ack another oc character nothin new...
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  • From ANON - Margaret on June 11, 2005
    GREAT CHAPTER 4! LOL Tavin got slapped after being thrown into a wall! That's great! HAHAHA Liked the club scene with the dancing, and oh no a new Sith is spying. I am looking forward to more!
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 09, 2005
    it's a good story, but why is it rated NC-17? There's nothing in it.
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  • From ANON - DoughyGuy on June 08, 2005
    I love the story so far, but it's a little hard to read... Try breaking the paragraphs up a bit, especially during conversations (sometimes it's hard to tell who's speaking).


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  • From ANON - Ashley on June 06, 2005
    I really want to read this and I'm sure it's really good, but the huge blocks of paragraphs makes it impossible. Could you format a little?
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  • From ANON - Blood Prince on June 06, 2005
    Hehehe. He had it coming. All around good chapter, only thing to complain about is the slightly block-ish paragraphs, but other than that its great! I can't wait for more
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 06, 2005
    Glee! Must have more!
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  • From ANON - Phantom on June 05, 2005
    Not bad. Good job on keeping Aayla alive. Also, it seems like you have some interesting twists planned, I can't wait to read more.
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