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Reviews for One Hell Of A Reuion

By : sjs
  • From botonchan on June 20, 2005
    I like your train of thought so far. {I'm on chapter two...}
    just a few suggestions though, try and be more descriptive with your sceanes and chericter apperances what they are feeling and thinking. Ido not know about others but when ni read i try to find some part of a chericter that I can relate to. for me this makes the stories plot seem more real and enjoyable. this is NOt a flame! *shiver* I hate those. but i love this thus far. if you would like I could help you to write a more descriptive virsion. I only offer because i despise when readers review and critisize w/o offering to help fix what they think needs to be tweeked.
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