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Reviews for Darkness Leads the Way

By : Chaosdreamer
  • From ANON - Dreamfool on November 14, 2005
    i was finally able to read the new updates. good. very good. too perfect. you got the whole post tramatic stress thing down perfectly from the defensive behavior to how the fear manifested itself. i must worship your ability to write as well as your knowlege of the human phychy. riddick new exactly how to handle poor Vaako's distress but you managed to make the process real and not an instant recovery.miracolus. i hate it when people make everything unkydory after dramatic events. its sooo... fake.
    again i love your use of the hell hounds. i wondered how they moved around the ship with out terrifying every one. after all, animals like that need exercise. on a side note i would love to see slasher (the name of the hell hound riddick befriended. this i learned fom the book. yes there is a book.) do some consoling of his own towards his master's mate. how about, after an incounter with the beast.
    oh, and about the beast being on the ship. too cool. suspenceful. i bow before your genious. how did it get on? are there more? what will the necros do?
    please, update soon. but don't rush yourself. good writing takes time.
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  • From ANON - Evol on November 13, 2005
    coooooolll....!
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  • From ANON - chibifae on November 12, 2005
    waited forever for update. It was worth the wait. awesome. i love this story. please update again soon. I can't believe u've got one of them on the ship!
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  • From ANON - Biokinetic on November 12, 2005
    Hewo!This is Aubrey again, you update you updated you update so happy happy happy!!
    ^_^;;;Sorry there, so excited and happy, especially when i got the email from you. Thankyou for updating I was so afraid that you had forgotten and ...yeah...thankyou.!
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  • From ANON - scyllablue on November 12, 2005
    Two awesome chapters! Really liked that Riddick and Vaako didn't do everything in one night. As for terminology, sweetie, don't sweat it. My boyfriend teased me about using 'cock' instead of 'penis'. We had a very bizarre conversation about male anatomy and what you call it. One of those conversations you can't believe you're actually having. He says he calls it 'his dick'. I said that's Batman's sidekick, and it pretty much went from there. Depending on the character, though, I do label it differently. ;-) Sometimes it's a dick, sometimes it's his maleness. I try to think of the comfort zone of the character I'm writing the pov scene in because different words can change the overall atmosphere of the scene. Anyway, what's with the cliffhanger!? I feel it's not going to bode well for our Vaako!
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  • From ANON - dreamfool on November 12, 2005
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    love you love you love you llooooove yyooouuuuu.

    2 updates in one day, God (reaches uot and pulls you into big bear hug) thank you thank you thank you thank you i'm ssssooooooooo happy. (notices your blue face and ends hug with an apology) i will give ab official review when i can read the chappies. unortunally i can't at the moment.
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  • From ANON - RJ on November 12, 2005
    OOOOOOOOOOooooooooOOOOOO!!!!!! Can't wait for the next Chapter!!!!!! Please put it up fast I want to see what happens next!! Your soooo goood I love Riddick and Vaacko stroies sooo hard to find and there's not many stories of CoR out there either. Keep up the Hard work!!!!Peace!! :)
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  • From ANON - DarkQueen on November 12, 2005
    Can't wait till the next chapter. I wonder what Riddick is up to in turning out the lights to help Vaako trust him? Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - vinchildy on November 11, 2005
    wow another great chapter. i wait so long for it. it was well worth the wait. can't wait for the next update.
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  • From ANON - blowpop189 on November 10, 2005
    I lusted after Vaako in the movie, and than to find out that
    there are these fan fiction sites is awsome. I really enjoyed this
    story, I am actually reading it again. I hope you continue this and see
    where it goes.
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  • From hellsraven on November 03, 2005
    I hope you update this fic it's great.
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  • From ANON - Chiaki Dark on October 29, 2005
    Such a lovely read! Seriously the BEST Riddick/Vaako out there yet and I hope you not only continue to write this great fic, but maybe write another fic for this pairing in the future? *smiles hopefully*

    Everything is so well done, and I can hardly wait for the next chapter. Healing, learning, and hopefully some loving action between our deserving couple!!

    *boucnes with utter joy*

    Take care!
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  • From ANON - escagirluk on October 27, 2005
    Oooooh! I likes, I likes! Great job so far. Update soon, please!
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  • From ANON - scyllablue on October 25, 2005
    Yes, yes, dreamfool has many wonderful things to say . . . but I want to know where the update is! I'm the last person to criticize, but I'm starving here! Waahhh
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  • From ANON - dreamfool on October 25, 2005
    This is definately the best Riddick fic i've read so far. i love pairing Riddick and Vaako together, they're so perfect. you also did an awsome job of keeping true to the characters. Dame Vaako is still power hungry and manipulative. Vaako is still loyal to his faith and craving of reconition and real affection. And Riddick is still... well, Riddick. there is no other way to describe him. it was only natural that Dame Vaako would attempt to seduce Riddick. you also have continued to use Dame Vaako's use of her husband's strength to the faith. i love the return of the Hell Hounds. i'm an animal lover and it's just so fitting that Riddick comand an army of leathal soldiers and lead a pack of vicious animals, showing his human and primitive side at the same time. and his value of loyalty. they are deffinately a match for the night monsters. it was too cool how you had that one Hell Hound be close enough to Riddick to sense his masters mate. back to the trust issue. Riddick's responce was totaly in character. the you went and brought back that god forsaken planet. LOVE IT. totally original and the perfect punishment for backstabbing traitors (even though Vaako wasn't one). i was disapointed in the insanity of the Dame but it it was a good twist. i personally loved Dame Vaako. her character was so well developed and the actress deserves an award for her preformace. however her end was befitting. writers rarely depict the mental wounds of such dramatic events, thanks for doing that. probably the best part of your whole fic is Riddick not revealing his abilities as a Lord Marshal till that critical moment. beautiful. i am looking forward to what happens and i'm definatly hoping for a little more Riddick/Vaako action.
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