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Reviews for Lost to the Sea

By : Taimat
  • From on June 30, 2005
    BAH! She isn't a Mary-Sue! If anyone says so that's their opinion.....I like it so far. Update soon!

    -Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful

    ps.- My characters write themselves too.
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  • From ANON - Angel on June 30, 2005
    Write more now
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  • From ANON - Blodughadda on June 30, 2005
    I do find this story somewhat interesting. It's well written and I like that.
    However... I hate to say it, but your OC is a Mary Sue. First sign: the eyes. Why do they have to be purple? Second sign: Raised and speaks with dolphins. Third sign: the unusual name. Fourth sign: her beauty. I could list more reasons, but I think you get my point.

    This does not mean I complety dislike the story though. I think you have an interesting idea here, and your writing skills are good. The only thing that bothers me is the OC, but that might just be me. Some people like this kind of OC, I'm just one of those that doesn't.
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  • From on June 28, 2005
    "Now Bring me that Horizon" Is my favorite line! I tend to say more often than not. Update soon, this story has my interest.

    -Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful
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  • From ANON - lisa on May 15, 2005
    this is fun!!! update soon please
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  • From ANON - MarzBar on May 07, 2005
    At this point I'm hoping Epsilon manages to get away from people and back to the dolphins. Humans are cruei and untrusworthy and now it seems that even the delicious Captain Jack is being pretty stupid.
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  • From ANON - MarzBar on May 01, 2005
    Intriguing start. Is this a real mermaid? Please give us more because I'm curious now.
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  • From ANON - Miya Sparrow on May 01, 2005
    Ah! cool she's a Mermaid! theres no other thing she could be, I mean right? tell me I'm right! well anyway I like it, please update
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