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Reviews for Unseasoned Ties

By : amistillill
  • From ANON - Crooke on June 16, 2005
    I am enjoying this story so much! Please continue!
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  • From ANON - Lyla on June 16, 2005
    i love this story. jack is perfect, i can totaly see him act this way. i wish i could write him this well. god jack is a sexy beast. youre awesome. this story is awesome. i really want youto hurry and update. i cant wait to read what happens next. there needs to be some lovin. please hurry!!!
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  • From ANON - Lisa on June 16, 2005
    Well I will say your story is very good! The only question I have is, are you sure you have his accent right? I have watched the movie Pirates of the Caribbean a million times, and you almost seem to have given Jack a scottish accent. Perhaps it is the way I am reading it...... but I suppose the thing that really gets me is when he says, "'ye'". other than that, its perfect! You seem to have captured Jack and his preferences very well. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Em on June 15, 2005
    WOW, best story ever!! Seriously, whoa... Hoping for more of those "you/Jack" scenes that rock. Deserted island would be good, if not cliche. :D
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  • From ANON - Gen on June 14, 2005
    Your story is amazing. It absolutely made my day, and hooked me from the second sentence. You capture Sparrow perfectly, and I could hear him saying the lines as I read them. Please...make my year and keep updating ! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Pix on June 13, 2005
    Oi, I love this story! It's so....cute! I guess that would be the right word for it. Good plot! Please keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 10, 2005
    Grrreat update! Cant wait for the next chapter! You're doing a great job capturing the sexual tension :)
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  • From ANON - MarzBar on June 10, 2005
    Thanks for the latest. She seems to be getting on a bit better now. I suspect that being with Jack is a good motivation for her. More please.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 06, 2005
    Lovely lovely story, you've got Jack's personality perfect. This story is perfect. Keep up the good work,
    Jokerfest
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  • From ANON - Ivie on June 02, 2005
    Very nice. Updates soon, I hope. *lurks in wait*
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  • From ANON - K on June 02, 2005
    So far so good. I'm just on the 3rd Chapter but I really like the sarcastic tone she has and I think you got Jack's character down very well too =)
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  • From ANON - Molly on May 30, 2005
    Update really soon. I love this story. 'I' am awesome. You write Jack perfectly. He's soooooo adorable.
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  • From ANON - MarzBar on May 19, 2005
    Teeheehee! Some of this is very funny! I do, however, object to the woman being such a blockhead so often if I am supposed to imagine it is me. The test of intelligence is adaptability and she is not getting it so far. Smarten her up.
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  • From ANON - Indigo21 on May 15, 2005
    Wow, this story is amazing! Please write some more!!! I love the way you portray Jack. I hope that the main character (yay, it's me!) gets to wear a cool old dress, it'd be really awesome if it were the same dress that was in the movie.
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  • From ANON - Crystal on May 15, 2005
    VERY nice. Loved it, keep it coming.
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