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Reviews for Unexpected Reunions

By : hellborne
  • From ANON - Elin on November 14, 2005
    Moooore Moooooore nooooooooow Hehe
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  • From ANON - Esfinge on October 15, 2005
    Oh, I've been waiting for this chapter to be posted for months ^_^. I really like the way this is going, even if Jack won't admit who he is, but at least he didn't got hanged. His mother seems like a good person, stubborn enough to deal with Jack's temper and stubbornness. I hope you'll update soon and that you start to feel better ;)
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  • From ANON - zyn1213 on October 11, 2005
    I really like it! I think you have the best representation of Jack I've read in a fanfiction. In addition, your grammer and vocabulary are very good. Not to knock other writers, but they seem to lack a basic grasp of both. I'm going to keep an eye out for this story, it's very good. It stays within the realm of possibily and manages to be funny at the same time. I'm most interested in what's going to happen once Jack is cut down and how that changes things for everyone.
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  • From ANON - Esfinge on September 12, 2005
    Oh, I do love this story. You're plot is one of the best so far and the scene where they raid The Royale were so cool. I laughte so hard when the lady slapped Will twice ^_^. I hope you've got plans to update this story soon because I really want to read the next chapter, and see if Jack is still alive.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 11, 2005
    Oh how can you possibly leave it there like that I need more. I need an update.
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  • From ANON - liz on August 30, 2005
    WHAT YOU CAN'T KILL JACK please finish the story
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  • From ANON - Vagabond on August 25, 2005
    Great read, waitin for yer updates!
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  • From ANON - LiaR on July 09, 2005
    I liked this well enough. The quality of writing isn't the greatest, but it's considerably better than average. I think it's a little on the slow moving (boring) side which is probably where you're hitting a problem. Plus there's no real center stage pairing, which is what most people drool over. AdultFanFiction.net = smut, smut and more smut. Once again, I liked it well enough, but hopefully the criticism helps you.

    When you post another chapter I will go into more specifics with the writing critique.

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  • From ANON - PixieDust on July 08, 2005
    Well I think it's a great story! Just a guess, but the nobles on that ship are Jack's parents, right? And it'd be nice to know exactly WHY Elizabeth in no longer w/Will, and how Will wound up pirating w/Jack... Is there maybe an earlier story I missed?? Still, it's a great story...keep it up!
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  • From ANON - MarzBar on April 26, 2005
    Teeheehee! This story is good for laughs. Unbelievable that Elizabeth was dumb enough to marry Norrington but it's a good plot device. Please keep writing.
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  • From ANON - littlebird on April 24, 2005
    >“But Jack, I’ve not heard of any nobles named Sparrow.”
    He might have taken on that name after the family's coat of arms? Couldn't there be a family or castle/smalltown with a sparrow on their coat of arms? The comodore or Lizzy might even become aware of that one day.
    > “You mean it’s put you in danger. Commodore Norrington can’t hang a noble.”
    But nobody would believe Jack if he claimed to be a noble. If it were that easy every pirate would try.
    Why on earth did the commodore not wait until Will and Jack had set Elizabeth ashore before he ordered his men out of hiding, if he really wanted to capture Jack?
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  • From ANON - Me on April 22, 2005
    first i have to tell you that i'm a big fan of your writing! i got addicted to your storys a long while ago but i'm not really good in writing feedback. just wanted to tell you that you're one of the most talented authors i've read so far. i adore your way of writing the characters and the backstorys you gave them in your other fics. keep going like this! and update soon! greetings and hugs
    me
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  • From ANON - MarzBar on April 21, 2005
    Oh dear. Now Elizabeth is going to have to hide Jack and Will in Port Royal for a while. Too bad for her she married Norrington.
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  • From ANON - littlebird on April 20, 2005
    Foolish pirate, relying entirely on Jamie's goodwill. He should at least have expected a few arresting-minded soldiers waiting for him.
    Please don't sink poor Pearl!
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  • From ANON - littlebird on April 19, 2005
    > the cotton wadding weighs
    > less than a shot, so it travels farther.
    Does it? It has high aerodynamic resistance.
    > "Uh, no, I...uh...never thought of that."
    >[...] “But that would be an insult to Governor Swann’s memory!”
    *rotfl* That's Will: act first, never mind the consequences, and entirely too much focused on propriety.
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