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Reviews for Single Minded Purpose

By : AgentSekhmet
  • From ANON - Nicolina on June 13, 2005
    OMG! That was painful reading... Ok, you sure made Smith into the most evil one could imagine... I´m speechless. But as always your writing is amazing!
    Nic.
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  • From ANON - Nicloina on June 08, 2005
    I´m a lot quiter now but I´m repeatedly checking up on your story and continuing on my own meanwhile... This is so interesting. Ok, so he´s a bastard... but he was still a lot worse to Bronwyn, or was it that I really cared about Bronwyn? She got to me all from the start. He seems insane... you´re making him seem to be loosing it some more every day... That´s faschinating! Please continue! Love Nic.
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  • From ANON - Alexandra on June 06, 2005
    Smith you rat bastard! >:(
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  • From ANON - alexandra on May 27, 2005
    Okay so now Seraph isn't her brother .... interesting. I agree with The Oracle, if she sticks with Smith, no matter how great the sex is, she could get seriously hurt.
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  • From ANON - alexandra on May 18, 2005
    WOW! That was hot! Although I have to say he did fuck up when he called out the wrong name. I can so relate to that when I did the same thing during sex. Must remember that my other half's name is not Smith.
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  • From AlexandraXI on April 30, 2005
    OMG! Smith almost kissed her! Damn! I wish that was me at that moment! I can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From AlexandraXI on April 27, 2005
    OMG! Smith is actually sorry for what he's done???? Holy crap! Please update!
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  • From ANON - Nicolina on April 25, 2005
    I´m so excited that you are writing more. Please, please continue! But I´m puzzled... Smith seems somewhat more human now, more sensitive. Shouldn´t it be the other way around? Or is it my misinterpretation?
    Love, Nic.
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  • From ANON - Nautical Acronym on April 20, 2005
    I'm so glad that you decided to continue! This is turning out very well, but I think there is a repeat error in the middle of the story, when Max is speaking to Smith about the arm wrestel. Other then that it's great!
    YAY! Smith!
    And it's good to see that he seems to have gained at least some respect for women. :)
    Too-da-loo!
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  • From ANON - alexandra on April 20, 2005
    I love how you made Smith give the snide little quip to old snatch who made the comment to Sarah for the way she was dressed. I'll have to remember that line for the little bippy twats who walk into the night club where I work. And the fact that she's Seraph's sister! OMG! Way to throw your readers for a loop! Please! Please! Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Selina on April 18, 2005
    Awww that was heartbraking...! Is that a sequel?
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  • From ANON - alexandra on April 15, 2005
    YES! A sequal! I wondered what became of Smith after Browyn's death. Please continue with this story you make him sound so complex, but yet you fix it to where he can be understood. He's finally realizing that he brought this on himself somehow even though he doesn't want to admit to it.
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