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Reviews for My Own God

By : FloweringWolfsbane
  • From ANON - RamaKandra on January 28, 2006
    Er.... did we see the same trilogy?

    Somehow, Smith bent over a desk and telling a randim-insert female "Oh yes, I have been very bad" kind of makes the head go splodey. I mean, if it turns you on, that's cool, we all have our fan-tasties. But whether or not the song fic itself is good..... it strikes me as wildly OOC. I kind of cringed in embarrassment, before clicking out of the story- it just.... eeeeee. Pulled me right out of it, 'cos my stomach was crawling. Some things don't translate well to being written out.

    Not a slam, obv.- just my own subjective criticism.
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  • From ANON - Selina Enriquez on September 01, 2005
    Ah! Finished re-readingthe story. I must say that I look forwerd to Sequel - a lot.

    You have so many talents. FW. I am so proud of you :)
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  • From ANON - Selina Enriquez on September 01, 2005
    It's a very movig story, like a rollercoaster :)
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  • From ANON - Selina Enriquez on September 01, 2005
    Thomas Anderson. Ugh.
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  • From ANON - Selina Enriquez on September 01, 2005
    "Bad, Bad Medicine"

    LOL :D

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  • From ANON - Selina Enriquez on September 01, 2005
    "Something about the way she has said fun made him question her definition; blood, seeing him in pain, seeing him suffer…he shuddered, both in fear and in anticipation."

    Yes, she is indeed a bit...cruel :)
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  • From ANON - Selina Enriquez on September 01, 2005
    Very very kinky, Miss FW :)
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  • From ANON - Selina Enriquez on September 01, 2005
    Opps - you are missing the rest of the cahper :-/
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  • From ANON - Selina Enriquez on September 01, 2005
    That is the essense of Domination
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  • From ANON - Selina Enriquez on September 01, 2005
    "She experimented with a tentative lick, taking the small amount of bitter seed into her mouth, carefully deciding if this was something she wanted to do" Oh the tease :)
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  • From ANON - Selina Enriquez on September 01, 2005
    Thisis simply too hot :)
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  • From ANON - Selina Enriquez on September 01, 2005
    Beautifully written. "As she looked at him, she knew this Matrix Era was drawing to its end, as she had known each of its predecessors was going to be rebooted by the One."
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  • From ANON - Selina Enriquez on September 01, 2005
    Oh that is so hot!
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  • From ANON - Selina Enriquez on September 01, 2005
    I love how you mix the song with story
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  • From ANON - Selina Enriquez on September 01, 2005
    "“Ah, ze ever forzeful Agent Em. I tell you, I will tell zem to remove zer weaponz if you alzo do it.”" LOL love the French accent
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