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Reviews for At the edge of time and space

By : Mesopotamia
  • From ANON - Grifter on August 05, 2006
    Delicious. This is delicious.
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  • From ANON - Rainbow on August 21, 2005
    I'm glad it ended well. You're a great author, and it was a very well-written piece. I'm debating whether or not I should risk my good opinion of you by reading your supposedly "Sick and twisted" other work.
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  • From FairyPoet on August 19, 2005
    I giggle at balls


    LMAO

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  • From ANON - Julia on August 17, 2005
    I like the idea of somebody other "reciting" the charm to summon the Goblin King (or make him take somebody away) - it's an interesting idea.

    Drawback: Dude, like, the language totally freaks me out.

    Most of the characters sound like the stereotypical high school kids - not even real ones, only like bad tv show ones. Of course that could be intentional, but Sarah uses much the same language, and she didn't in the movie.

    Also... the "all the evil kids pick at the main character" scares me a bit, because that's often a trademark of the dreaded Mary S.... ehm, Spaw of Satan.

    So, between the really nice starting idea and the "poor Sarah", I'm curious to see where this story will go.



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  • From on August 09, 2005
    is that it?
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  • From ANON - Chihiro on August 02, 2005
    Woah, woah, woah. Don't tell me chapter 12 was the end dear author. You better put up a new chapter soon before you find a mob at your front doorstep.

    lol Hope you update soon!
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  • From ANON - SilkenPetal on July 14, 2005
    Your going to update this awesome story soon, right?
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  • From ANON - Faye on July 01, 2005
    A very interesting and wonderful story....I read all 12 chapters in one go.....please update!
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  • From ANON - Lady Moon on May 18, 2005
    I love it!!!
    its such a cute and awsome story, i can't wait to read more and to find out what jareth has finally decided to do!!!!
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  • From ANON - Snoozepossum on May 17, 2005
    ***The man stopped and looked to be considering her offer. “Nah, I bought leather pants there a year ago and they ripped apart at the crotch, so never again.”***

    Snicker . . . giggle . . . ROTFLMAO! Sniff . . . beauty! Been there, done that, except they were PVC! Interesting take on the "Sarah goes back" thing

    (settles back down under the mushroom with hot tea to read more)

    ;0)
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  • From ANON - DarkMystic on May 12, 2005
    I love the way you write, even tho its not usually what I read the whole slave and m,aster thingy lol. Im glad he atleast started talking to her during the last chapters, even tho he said it was for revnge to break her in the end. I so hope he doesnt ruin it. *Grumbles, and shakes her fist at him.* Yeah! you! Dont ruin what you got goin for yah! ...Ooops hehe sorry, anyways I love this story so much that when you finish your next chapter and any after that one, I would like it if you would email m e at the address posted at the top of this messedge. Thank you, update soon. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Sailor Aurora on May 10, 2005
    Mmmm, lovely fanfiction piece you got there. And I argee, Jareth seems so much better when he's not so nice. After all, he's the GOBLIN king, how can he be "nice" in a way a human would?

    lol e-mail if you update, please.
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  • From ANON - Phoenixangel7 on April 26, 2005
    Please keep adding to this story! I'm begging you!
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  • From ANON - Danielle on April 06, 2005
    This story is wonderful!! Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Tiffany on April 02, 2005
    I enjoyed reading your story and hope that you continue to write more on it. I even added it to my favorites list. Keep
    up the great work!!!!!!
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