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Reviews for Once Upon A Time

By : SilkenPetal
  • From ANON - elh on April 04, 2011
    good sex scenes but a bit confusing with these random parts thrown in or maybe i was just tired i kept skipping. the first couple of chapters quoting the movie verbatim just seemed redundant, i mean i know he movie lines by heart lol (sad but true)and dont really need to read them word for word i found myself yayaya skip ski til ur own original parts
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  • From theInsaneArtist on August 10, 2010
    Excellent, I'm thoroughly hooked! It can be very tricky when you start writing without a set goal, but I hope inspiration comes to you soon.
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  • From ANON - Snootchie on October 23, 2008
    I love this so much. Im really into it. I dont read fanfiction often, but this really entices me.. I could just make up the ending in my head but this is so amazing I have to request more. Lovelovelove it. Youre a great writer :)
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  • From serena221 on October 02, 2007
    Please please please come out with the next chapter. this is a good story. and i can't wait for more
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  • From serena221 on September 20, 2007
    This is good. i'm amazed at how well you've taken the end of the labryinth and made a new story from it. i can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - TONIA D on July 16, 2007
    HEY I LOVED THE STORY SO FAR AND I HOPE THAT YOU UPDATE REGULARLY OR SOMETHING SO I DONT GET BORED OUT OF MY MIND LISTENING TO SOME OTHER NOT SO WELL WRITTEN STORY OF J/S PAIRING. JA NE
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  • From DarkRoseofChaos on June 29, 2007
    oo, this is pretty good. You should update soon or I may just cry!
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  • From ANON - Athlantis on June 16, 2007
    Why the hell haven't you updated this?????!!!!

    get your butt back here!!!!!

    anyway, I'm absolutely loving this!!!!

    please, oh pretty pretty please with a cherry on top, finish this fic!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Megan on June 02, 2007
    I stumbled across this site from a friend and I found your story.
    I must say that I love it! The Labyrinth is one of my favorites but to take it this deep makes me love it even more. Going more in depth with the characters and adding parts of the movie into it really makes it seem like this is what happens before or after the movie.
    Well done!

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  • From ANON - Annie on January 05, 2007
    poor linda. i love this, update soon.
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  • From ANON - Metis on October 29, 2006
    Hmm. So he knows who she was. Sarah wouldn't be happy with his manipulation of her mother and thus her life. Who would?
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  • From ANON - Metis on October 29, 2006
    Oh, and way to go Hoggle. Mr. Sensitivity award. 9_9
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  • From ANON - Metis on October 29, 2006
    Past lives maybe? I hope they stay together in this one.
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  • From ANON - Metis on October 29, 2006
    Good. I'm glad he found her so soon. It would have been awkward the longer she kept it secret. Interesting dream. Interesting how long he's been around and just how powerful he is... and alone.
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  • From ANON - Metis on October 29, 2006
    Ah yes. Very young indeed. I hope that he will have the patience to let her grow intellectually and emotionally. She belongs in the underground anyway. The Above is too drained of true Magic to sustain her.
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