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By : AlexandraXI
  • From ANON - Smithsbabe65 on April 04, 2005
    Alexandra:

    *Deafening applause* Bravo, bravo! That was one hell of an ending! You have really blown me away with this entire story! I'm your most avid fan! Fantastic job!

    Smithsbabe65
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  • From ANON - c_anchelia@hotmail.com on April 01, 2005
    Alexandra:

    What a plot twist! You've managed to blindside me. I didn't even see that coming! Whew, I am just beside myself with sadness. Poor Amanda, but she loves Smith! Hurray! Now, you must hurry and write the next chapter! I'm dying to know what happens next!


    Smithsbabe65
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  • From ANON - Selina Enriquez on April 01, 2005
    ...

    .....


    *fucking dies*


    more.
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  • From ANON - Smithsbabe65 on March 29, 2005
    Alexandra:

    She's just got to love Smith back, she's got to! What's not to love? Those baby blues, that nice tight ass and a voice that would send any girl into a tizzy! Poor Amanda, she's scared that she'll loose Smith the way she lost Kyle. Hurry with the next chapter, I've just got to know if Smith love will be requited or not. Great job, BTW!

    Smithsbabe65
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  • From ANON - Smithsbabe65 on March 23, 2005
    Alexandra:

    Very hot! I wasn't aware that Smith was such an exhibitionist...I love that way you write him, he's hot, horny and insatiable! It seems the other agents are the same way. Damn, where can a girl go to get her very own love machine? I guess I'll have to consult the Oracle about that one! Keep going, this story is just too good to stop now!

    Smithsbabe65

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  • From ANON - Smithsbabe65 on March 21, 2005
    Alexandra:

    Hmmm, it seems that Amanda is going to tread into uncharted territory...I could sense her apprehension, I can't say that I blame her. I would be as jittery as a jackrabbit not know what was going to happen next, but I am a bit curious and am looking forward to finding out.

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  • From ANON - Smithsbabe65 on March 15, 2005
    Alexandra:

    Could Smith and his fellow agents be involved in some kind of clandestine white slavery ring or something like that? Or perhaps the agents will be swapping partners, although I don't picture Smith allowing Amanda to be touched by another man without some serious reprucussions happening...well I guess I'll have to wait and see if my theories are correct in the next inticing installment. Great job Alex, as usual!

    Smithsbabe65
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  • From ANON - Smithsbabe65 on March 14, 2005
    Alexandra:

    That was so delicious!! Outstanding chapter! I'm glad to see that comments from narrow minded people like Outlaw have not diminished the intesity of your story!

    Oh, and one more thing: More, more, more!

    P.S. Selina, I'm glad to see that I wasn't the only that came to Alexandra's defense, although you were a bit harsh, NOT!!!

    Smithsbabe65
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  • From ANON - Selina Enriquez on March 11, 2005
    *ahem*

    I might have overreacted a bit. But Alex is a good girl and I will fight for her.
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  • From ANON - Selina Enriquez on March 11, 2005
    "outlaw unknown to you 2005-03-10 id # 2035176857
    This story is too sexual, and it depicts Smith too dominating. I couldn't even read the rest of it. I read part of it and then quit because it started disturbing and forcing me to shake my head."



    First of all, Outlaw: Do you see a DISNEY sign here? Or sweet fluffy teddy bears?? Or perhaps a Ronald MacDonald???


    This is the ADULTfanfiction.Net, Outlaw.


    Let me enlighten you what Merrian-Webster says about the word 'adult':


    Entry Word: adult
    Function: adjective
    Text: Synonyms MATURE 1, full-blown, full-fledged, full-grown, grown, grown-up, matured, ripe, ripened
    Related Word: aged
    Contrasted Words: adolescent, pubescent
    Antonyms: juvenile, puerile



    Mature - that means being capable of reading the stuff for ADULTS such as EXPLICIT SEX SCENES.


    Secondly, if you don't like Alexandra's story or don't have any constructive to say, I suggest you shouldn't comment.

    AdultFanFiction.Net is not a church. And if you don't like the contents, perhaps you should be better off to Disney.com


    That will be all.


    --S
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  • From ANON - Smithsbabe65 on March 11, 2005
    To Outlaw:

    I hate to point out the obvious, but this is an adult fan fiction site! It is clear from your reaction to sexual material that you are either a prude or you are too young to be on this site. Might I recommend that you check out Fan Fiction.net., the stories there might be more to your liking.

    To Alexandra:

    Don't let the last reviewer ruffle your feathers, this story is fabulous!

    Smithsbabe65
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  • From ANON - Alexandra on March 10, 2005
    To the last reviewer,

    This is ADULT FAN FICTION. If you have a problem with a fan fic being overtly sexual, then don't read it. If you have problems with sexually graphic descriptions then this is not the site for you. There are a lot of stories on this site that are more sexually graphic than this one. Have a nice day!

    The Author
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  • From ANON - outlaw on March 10, 2005
    This story is too sexual, and it depicts Smith too dominating. I couldn't even read the rest of it. I read part of it and then quit because it started disturbing and forcing me to shake my head.
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  • From ANON - Smithsbabe65 on March 09, 2005
    Alexandra:

    Best chapter ever! It was naughty and nasty, just the way I like it! You have such a talent for being so descriptive and the dialogue is priceless. Phone sex with Smith, very yummy indeed! Great job, girl! Keep going, I can't wait to see what kind of homecoming Smith will be receiving from Amanda!

    Smithsbabe65
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  • From ANON - Smithsbabe65 on March 07, 2005
    Alexandra:

    I don't think I can take much more! This story is scorching hot! It just gets better and better with each chapter you post. Please hurry with the next one, I can hardly wait!

    Smithsbabe65
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