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Reviews for Aces and Moonshine

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  • From ANON - Tomo on January 16, 2005
    Wonderful story. Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - spanishgoddess86 on January 15, 2005
    great chapter. I love how both Jack and Will are in the whole I might actually feel something for the other person phase. (does that make sense?) Anyway can't wait for the next chapter. I think I've said this before and if I haven't this story is very interesting and very nicely thought out.
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  • From ANON - hanover88 on January 15, 2005
    this fic is soooo good! please update soon!
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  • From ANON - kurami on January 15, 2005
    lol! don't forget the bob cut and foot-long cigarette!

    you're amazing. i turned on my computer this morning, checked adultfanfiction.net, and there were two new chapters up. a few spelling and grammatical errors here and there, but that's just me being nitpicky. all in all, your story is absolutely brilliant. please keep the chapters churning out. if you decide to stop writing in the middle of the story, i shall have to hunt you down and make you watch teletubbies. on repeat.
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  • From ANON - spanishgoddess86 on January 15, 2005
    I'm so glad you updated! With the fact all the livejournal's right now are down for no telling how long there going to be down and everything tonight just seems so slow. This diffently lifted my spirts some.


    Anyway getting back to why I'm actually writing this review. I wanted to tell you that I liked the chapter and found the poker game to be interesting and could only get more interesting. I wonder what going to happen.


    Anyway please update soon, I can't wait to read more.


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  • From ANON - Tabee on January 15, 2005
    I absolutely love this fic!

    AUs with PotC are among my favorite fics (esp. if its Jack/Will ;)

    I can't wait to see what happens when Jack figures out who Will is, its bound to happen, Jack knows all... eventually.

    how jealous can Louie and Will make Jack? hopefully we'll find out in the next bit!

    I really enjoy the '20s setting. Given their characters in the movie, its really easy to see them enjoying that era. And we all know Jack wouldn't take Prohibition lying down! Will as a gambler is a little harder to believe, but I prefer it to him being a law-abiding citizen. Everyone's gotta make a living somehow.

    How you will bring in all the characters (are you planning on using all the movie characters?) will be interesting, and I'm looking forward to finding out more about Bootstrap.

    I really can't wait for the next update, so make it soon please!
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  • From ANON - gail on January 14, 2005
    I am loving this story. Please update soon, or we'll have to get out the cannons. :)
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  • From ANON - twolane on January 14, 2005
    Gah. Hotness. Will bringing off another guy with Jack watching. Excuse me while I go melt into a puddle.
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  • From ANON - kurami on January 14, 2005
    you used "copacetic!" *dances in glee*

    the dialogue is absolutely perfect! you captured the 20s lingo beautifully. i can just imagine will and jack talking with the 20s accent with bowler hats tipped sideways. please write more!
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  • From hellborne on January 14, 2005
    This is one adorable story! I don't usually like AU's, but between this and Leave Me Lying Here, I might just reconsider. You really do know how to write. Will is a liittle OOC, but I like the direction you've taken him! Far better than the usual "Binky" he ends up as in other stories (and the movie as well, with that polish hostage scene...).

    Love it so far! Please continue!
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  • From ANON - spanishgoddess86 on January 14, 2005
    Oh that was hot. Will bringing the guy in a room full of people and Will only really liking it because Jack is watching. I could ve wrong but Jack knows now who Will is right because Jack somehow knows how to read lips right?? Anyway please update again really soon this story is interesting.
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  • From ANON - virgo264 on January 14, 2005
    This is hot stuff! I can so see Jack and Will in suits and bowler hats, cheating innocent people of their money. Looking forward to more!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 14, 2005
    This is a pretty fun story so far! I love the lingo and oh so typical Chicago "roaring 20's" styles!! Before this, I hadn't ever thought of Jack and Will in the 20's, but it looking at it, that time does seem to fit them extreamly well! Can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - hanover88 on January 14, 2005
    wow, it's really hard to find good jack/will fics, and yours is one of the best that I've read. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - kate on January 14, 2005
    awesome story! please write more!
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