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Reviews for Trapped in a Pyramid

By : Jeremy86
  • From ANON - Vito on January 29, 2005
    Hot stuff 'cha got here so please update soon Jersay.
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  • From ANON - harryhollow on January 28, 2005
    is their going to be a baby *giggles* I can't wait to read more so please update soon!!
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  • From ANON - Zoelai on January 28, 2005
    Sweeeeeet! love it
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  • From ANON - junk food addict on January 27, 2005
    UPDATE SOON,PLEASE!!!
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  • From ANON - Sean on January 26, 2005
    can't wait for more, please update as soon as possible
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  • From ANON - Shadow on January 26, 2005
    This is a sizzling story you have to update it soon. You have me along with twenty-three other fans waiting to know what happens next.
    I look forward to reading the next chapter to see what lays ahead.



    Great Story.
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  • From ANON - Dirty ol\' woman on January 24, 2005
    Two words HOT STORY.
    You must update soon, Please.
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  • From ANON - AEIES on January 23, 2005
    Please update soon this is a great alternative to the other sites.HOT STORY!

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  • From ANON - Hog on January 23, 2005
    Great story please update soon I love this story. an adult site means adult content. Bring on the lemons,and oral gratification from Scar.

    Update soon.
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  • From ANON - Happy fan on January 22, 2005
    I'm enjoying this story here I can get some adult fanfiction on my favorite sci-fi creature,the uber fine yautja although this fantasy, I envy Lex she gets to bang a predator lucky dog,you must finish this I hope you make this a lenghty story on these two throw in some real time situations for them like unwelcome comments they will encounter, and probably the biggest a baby, and maybe Scar risking his life to save his unborn child and Lex. Another idea Lex trains with the yautja she proves to them that she is just as tough as them and gains all of their respect by hunting along with the predators against the kiande amedha,pyode amedha, and other creatures claiming her own trophies.
    Finally make the lemons so hot that computer screens melt and lastly make Lex have Scar scream her name in forty diffrent tongues.

    Hurry...Hurry I can't wait!
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  • From ANON - Semi on January 22, 2005
    Waitimg for the next update I'm sitting by my computer looking for an update. Chapter 6 says lemons and suspense so bring it on.
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  • From ANON - Kiwi on January 22, 2005
    Please update this soon this is so steamy, I would have never thought that I would find a fanfiction where a human and predator are close like this. Machiko didn't even get a chance with the Yautja even though she proved herself time and time again in battle with them against the kiande amedha she was looked upon as an omega even though she was better than Shorty. Obiviously Scar has chosen Lex as his mate, but what will the elders say to him bringing a human aboard the mothership.
    Many questions if the elders allow her to stay what will Lex's reaction be towards the other predators and they to her,will she survive the brutal, harsh culture of the predators? How will she adjust to being intimate with a savage being,what will be her feelings now that she has been around the corner with Scar, and finally how will Scar handle all of this, it seems that he has a very soft spot for Lex or its quite possible that he may actually love her,for the being she is.Finally with all the lemons that you might possibly throw in here it is possible that Lex could conceive a hybird child and what kind of hell will be released if that happens so many roads you can take. And finally Please explain what a nude predator would look like without all that body armament I'm dying to know, his lower half has to be similar to a human male,I would love to read the reaction on Lex's face when she gets to see it and Scar's reaction to hers.
    Great story.
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  • From ANON - Aerow on January 22, 2005
    THis is completely Awesome I absolutely love what you did with this story. I had always had a little fantasy about the predators and this has made it better
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  • From ANON - noname on January 21, 2005
    Alexa's on the mothership Scar has to answer to the elders,what's gonna happen to him when he goes in front of the elders? Maybe they won't be so harsh on him,since Lex has proved herself to be a formidable warrior against the kiande amedha. Since the elders are older and wiser they will allow Lex to live amongst them,providing that Scar teaches and train her in the ways of the yautja,but what will happen once the elders find out that Scar has mated with an ooman and she could possibly bear an offspring of mixed blood.
    So we are going to see more lemons,between these two that's sweet(they're in love), as long as the story continues to have a story line, but bring on the lemons in full graphic detail and MORE GRUESOME VIOLENCE.
    PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

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  • From ANON - Reui on January 21, 2005
    Whoa,now this getting to be really hot ,so please update soon.
    Update soon.


    Great Story
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