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Reviews for Trapped in a Pyramid

By : Jeremy86
  • From ANON - Semi on February 05, 2005
    WHOA...Just a pointer guy about the Yautja. They refer to we humans as 'oomans.' Now that Scar is with the elders and he has explained the events that happened on earth, except for his nights of pleasure with Lex where will you take this?
    This sounds like it could be a lengthy story that could be filled with action, adventure, and romance. Please in your next update explain what the fallout will be if any to Lex entering the counsel room. Poor ole Scar seemed to be shocked,mad, and afraid when the door opened.

    I'd love to see the reactions on the faces of the elders,I hope that Scar stands up for Lex.


    UPDATE SOON!
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  • From ANON - Reui on February 05, 2005
    OMG... you must update this is starting to get really interesting.
    How will the elders respond to Lex entering the counsel room? I hope that she doesn't mouth off to them. Please explain the biting, was she having night terrors, or acting out her frustations in her sleep and poor ol' Scar was on the receiving end.

    Okay... back to the number one question. What are the elders going to do to Scar, how will he explain Lex being on the mothership, the death of Chopper and Celtic, the branding of an ooman female and the Queen. Since the predators sense of smell is five times stronger than ours they can't possibly miss Scar and Lex having sex.

    And finally what will the outcome be. Please update soon
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  • From ANON - Deno on February 05, 2005
    What's going to happen next I hope that Scar doesn't betray Lex. So why was Lex biting him? Did the Predators inject her with their DNA?
    What will be the Elders do to Lex once they find out that she and Scar have mated more than once?

    Please update soon
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  • From ANON - Amelie on February 04, 2005
    I'm really enjoying this, i can't wait to see more!
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  • From ANON - Remy on February 03, 2005
    Hot xeno sex...ooh. Please continue.
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  • From ANON - Katie on February 02, 2005
    ...Kinky? Lol. What happens next!?
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  • From ANON - Ol\' Dirty Woman on February 01, 2005
    More please.
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  • From ANON - Maury on January 31, 2005
    Sweet...sweet poor Scar is in love,Lex is probably getting the best sex in her life and she's worried about sexual transmitted diseases.
    Honey flumping like that she ain't worried about nothing but getting her stuff tore up by Scar now he's hooked beyond belief. Poor baby can't believe that Lex is responding to him like that and enjoying it too.What will the elders do to him, I hope that he will be forgiven so he and Lex can live together as a couple.

    Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Semi on January 31, 2005
    Scar is hooked he can't get enough of sexing Lex. Lex is worried about a std she should worry about a little hybird that could be conceived,if they keep on humping.
    Hey update soon.
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  • From ANON - Vito on January 31, 2005
    This is some hot stuff...whoa hey keep it coming dude.

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  • From ANON - Sean on January 31, 2005
    can't wait for more, please update as soon as possible
    Is Lex going to get pregnant
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  • From ANON - Weird Angel on January 31, 2005
    That was awesome. I couldn't wait 'til you post the next chapter. In fact I'm still anticipating the next. Keep 'em coming!
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  • From ANON - LeX-ScAr_FaN on January 30, 2005
    w00t! MoRe BaBy YeAh!
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  • From ANON - Fluffy-san on January 30, 2005
    Great story I'm really looking forward to your update and those lemons...oh I hope they are hot and steamy.
    I really enjoyed the movie it fueled my interest in the Yautja again and especially when the directors commentary in the movie mentioned that Scar was watching Lex's butt he was quite fascinated with her backside and her as a whole. There was definitely some chemistry going on between the two through out the movie. I wanted more from them but poor Scar had to die. This story is perfect not a lot of senseless lemons like some others I have read, but I have some questions:
    1 Was the chestburster removed?
    2 What was in that syringe they used on Lex?
    3 What will the elders do to Scar?
    4 How will the other predators react to Lex being a mate to a predator and with all the planned lemons will Lex become pregnant?
    Finally add some pineapples (fetishes) to the story and no story would be complete without some oral goodies I would like to see how Scar would pleasure Lex that way since he has mandibles.

    Great story please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Leroy Jenkins on January 29, 2005
    Hot story please update soon I'm a big predator fan and I always wanted to see interaction between a female human and a male predator
    AVP Prey did but not like this anyway I prefer Lex anyday over that puny,chain smoking Machiko.Well update when you can.

    Great story
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