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Reviews for Trapped in a Pyramid

By : Jeremy86
  • From ANON - LeX_ScAr_fAn on February 19, 2005
    I hope Scar doesn't get killed!
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  • From ANON - Anubis Silvermoon on February 19, 2005
    noo, whats gonna happen to Scar... this was another awesome chapter to your story
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  • From ANON - Anubis Silvermoon on February 18, 2005
    ::jumps up and down in excitement:: TWO NEW CHAPTERS!!!!!!!!!!!! .... ummm... calm now... This fic is one of my fave AVP stories I've read, your'e doing an awesome job of writing it
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  • From ANON - Megan Ross on February 15, 2005
    I absolutely love this story and I hope that you will update the next chapter soon, the suspence is killing me.
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  • From ANON - Anubis Silvermoon on February 13, 2005
    please, please, please update soon... this is a wonderful, addictive story (which I've reread over and over cause its just so awesome) and I check everyday to see if you've updated... umm.. yeah thats it.. ::on knees:: please update...
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  • From ANON - Leroy Jenkins on February 13, 2005
    Please update soon , this is great.
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  • From ANON - Reui on February 11, 2005
    UPDATE SOON.
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  • From ANON - Lauren on February 09, 2005
    Hi Jersay, this a great story you are fulfulling a fanasty that many people may have. Keep it up. One comment I see that removed a story from this site because several readers had given you not so great reviews. Never let the thoughts of others stop you from obtaining a goal even fan fiction most of the readers here are probably underage. So their views are worthless.

    I enjoy your work so keep it up. And make your chapters a little longer, I hate cliffhangers.
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  • From ANON - Horny Devil on February 08, 2005
    What a naughty Yautja!! >:) I would... you know what.

    I like this story! I thought I would never ever find a fanfiction of Predator like this... More close encounter between female human and male Predator. I have to admit that I always had a thing for the predators. Umm... Lex is lucky >:) she gets to do the "wild thing" with Scar! Is it just only me who has gone crazy to think that the Predator is hot (not that their don't look...attractive)?!
    Ahem.....Anyway I do think YOU SHOULDN'T STOP WRITING NOW!! KEEP IT UP!!! I just can't wait to read more!! I hope Scar would protect Lex from Elders IF they are intend to to any harm to her. Scar would be the "romantic type"...(literary impossible, but it's a fiction, things could happen...maybe?)
    Please DON'T STOP! COUNTINUE TO WRITE IT COMPLETE!

    NEMESIS: "STARSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS" Translated: "I'm totally gonna fry your ass with my long, hard rocket launcher!!"
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  • From ANON - Zel on February 07, 2005
    Wow! What an awesome story! Extremely hot! And here's a cliffhanger... can't wait till next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Tabby on February 07, 2005
    Holy Cow! A Predator and human female you have to be kidding me right? So there's a movie... No way man.... Dude....
    I'm at a lost for words.
    More...more this is wonderful.
    Come on with the the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Kiwi on February 06, 2005
    Wow! This is really starting to get exciting. So what happens next? You must make Lex pregnant; you know that would really throw things into a loop. Jersay keep it coming.

    And don't forget to add some more lemonsin the following chapters to come. Theres nothing more kinky than like reading about a Yautja beating up some ooman females stuff.

    UPDATE SOON DUDE!!!
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  • From ANON - Weird Angel on February 06, 2005
    Awww! You've stopped... Keep going!
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  • From ANON - Polliwog on February 05, 2005
    Two words HOT DAMN.
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  • From ANON - Mona Cevas on February 05, 2005
    Please update soon this getting to be really fun.

    Stop all the cliffhangers, okay.
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