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Reviews for Close Quarters

By : dawnenab
  • From ANON - jarbabyj on January 08, 2005
    very nice. Great work on the Jack and Riddick story. i wish the writers of the movies paid attention to what the fans wanted. Can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - shivingdeep on January 07, 2005
    Yo Ali, I'M LUVING THIS STORY HERE!! You hit the shiv right on the sweetspot with Jack/Riddick's relationship. I'm a HUGE FAN OF JACK/RIDDICK... I feel the exact same way with these two and i'm glad you're writing this story. They have such an unusual yet powerful and intriguing relationship...it's so strong that you can feel it through the dayum screen. You're doing a kick a$$ job caputuring their feelings and you just gotta feel with riddie..lol. Poo BAby is really struggling..trying to resist his urges of getting unrestrained with Jack..lol. That's soo cute...PLEASE UPDATE SOON...
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  • From ANON - yelsha on January 07, 2005
    PLEASE continue it! hurry, I am going through withdrawal! :)
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  • From ANON - florence on January 03, 2005
    so....what r ya gonna do next? U should make Jack find them in "the act" and make him (giggle) beg for forgiveness.....or....make it so that the women makes Riddick see what Jack means to him and not ACTUALLY have him do anything with the other women.....or....make it so that Jack doesnt see them "doing" anything but maybe sees them talking and "touching" and draws the wrong conclusions, gets all hurt, and Riddick has to go find an explain to her....well there r afew ideas. hope to read ya soon
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  • From ANON - bubblegirl on December 31, 2004
    nice work, i like the sexual tension, the grown up jack, the sassy woman and riddick of course! and yes please to another chapter.....or several ;)
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  • From ANON - Ashley on December 30, 2004
    It's really good. I enjoyed it. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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