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By : Northstar1982
  • From pontaloon on February 03, 2009
    i think Thax asks for Osmosis to 'be good' and 'a good boy' too much. i love the idea but i think you could find synonyms like telling him to 'behave' and 'obey' and instead of using 'good boy' so much, you could use 'puppy' or 'pet'. anyway those are just my suggestions. theres also a repetition of 'figuring' but thats less pronounced. i loved the fic btw ^^
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  • From Peggi on February 06, 2007
    Read the story BEFORE the authoress....YOU....AMAZE ME!!! Wow! Just...wow! Agree with the need to shiver and love the line at the end of "Dominate me"........wow.........WoOt you have done it AGAIN and amazed me some MORE!!! Not usually a fan of NonCon but had to see it, since there simply aren't enough Osmosis/Thrax stories out there...SIMPLY NOT ENOUGH CURE US OF THIS ILLNESS WE CALL NO WRITERS WRITING!!! Now...I think I will take a veeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeery cold shower...and then have my daydreams about Thrax coming to save me from this place I call "boring" lol. You write fantastic fics, MORE WE NEED MORE!!!
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  • From ANON - Tacos on July 13, 2006
    OMG THIS STORY RULES!
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  • From ANON - One-eyed Jester on November 11, 2005
    That was so freaking hot! you need to write more!
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  • From ANON - Explodingcoconutsinc on November 08, 2005
    Dangit...I need to do more laundry now....
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  • From on August 21, 2005
    Hooray!!! *scampers off to pantie drawer for a fresh pair* Very well done, my friend! Purr!

    I love this Ozzy/Thrax junk, as improbable as it is. Though it would be a pretty good way to explain AIDS.

    Super Sexy Aids Virus: Now, to disable the immue sytem...With lots of gay sex!! Who's first?
    Ozzy: *raising hand* Over here!!
    (disclamer: not bashing people with aids. I promise.)

    So recomending this fic!
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  • From Touch on February 07, 2005
    oh my, i do believe i need new underwear as well. i think i like that line. "dominate me" *shivers*. please excuse me, i must go molest something.
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  • From ANON - MarsW on December 23, 2004
    Great for not being used to write noncon! I loved it! Hey, funny, because I had a little sketch that looks like an image from this slash! :D
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  • From ANON - Sailor Aurora on December 14, 2004
    You know... I couldn't really see this happening, ever.
    this was really well-written though. I just had to pretend this was on some alien planet, and that thrax and jones were aliens... and then I did really enjoy some parts a little.

    Jones's a white cell, though... White cells are wired to "hate" virus cells... and so they will attack virus cells automically upon sighting and impact. that's the reason why I couldn't see it happening. don't you just hate it when sciefintic thinking rules out the impossbity of an good story? lol

    Anyway, I think there's more of a chance between Jones and that pill, but that's just me.
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  • From ANON - Dead Cell on December 08, 2004
    Gaaaah, hot! O_______O Write more Thrax/Ozzy! You rock!!
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