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Reviews for Of Revenge and Shattered Dreams

By : JennyPugh
  • From katrinacarvell on November 19, 2004
    *grins* Pray tell what kind of fight, love? ^.^

    And as far as this chapter goes, yay for Shay!!! Yum. ^.^ He's so cute. *snuggles a Shay plushie* But ofcorse, Jack is King. *snuggles life-size Jack plushie* This new girl- Patience- sounds interesting. *rubs chin* Perhaps she will talk. Then Valentine will be DEAD! Woo! And Jack and Jenny would be safer! And then Jenny could have the twins! And everything would be GOOD until ofcorse everyone needed some action, in which case plot would be reintroduced and...well you get the picture.

    More Jack is definately a requirement for the next chapter. *nods* I think people will rebel(l?) if they go for over a week without Jack. *snickers* Or mebbe that's just me. EITHER WAY! Excellent chapter and write more soon!

    Looking forward to it,
    Kat
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  • From ANON - Chelsey on November 19, 2004
    Why are women with information always so stubborn!? I'll never know. Oh well! Nice chapter I hope you update soon.

    -lots-o love-
    -Chelsey-
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  • From katrinacarvell on November 15, 2004
    *giggles* I love that Jenny stood up to Ana Maria. ^.^ Makes her seem extra courageous! Lol. I sense a mutiny on Job Bailey's hand and a possible love interest for Shay? ^.^ By the way, if I never said it before, I really love Shay's character! He seems so cool! And Irish! *smacks lips* Yummy! Jack, as always, is great- even when wounded. Can't wait for the next chapter.

    *Kat
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  • From katrinacarvell on November 11, 2004
    Long time no review. Terribly sorry, love. ^.^ Been busy with school and what not, and very short on free time. The last couple chapters have been marvelous! I'm still overjoyed about Jenny being pregnant (and I'm still voting for twins!). It was fun to hear from AnaMaria again. Glad she's got her own ship now. ((I also think her surname was awesome. Very smooth. Lol)) Valentine, however, is a bleeding bastard who needs to DIE. *growls* I'll bet next chapter dear Ol' Jack will be cursing himself for a missed shot. *grumbles* ....Just incase the thought did cross your mind, if you kill Jack off, there will be a hoard of angry, ANGRY women out for your blood. SO PLEASE DON'T KILL THE INFAMOUS, DEVILISHLY SEXY CAPTAIN JACK SPARROW BECAUSE OF A WIMPY LITTLE SHOULDER WOUND!!!!!!!!!! I mean c'mon!! He's Captain JACK SPARROW! *sobs at the fear of dead-Jack* So, yeah. Update soon. Soon soon soon. And death to Valentine. Yeah.

    *giggles*
    Loves, and great chappy!
    *Kat
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  • From ANON - Chelsey on November 10, 2004
    Holy shit! That was awesome! Jenny's gonna kill Jack when she see's him, even if he is hurt! Don't let Jenny get rapped again! Noth tth the babe on the way. No! Anywho update soon!

    -Chels- AKA: HisBeautiful
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  • From ANON - dramaced on November 08, 2004
    Just dropped in to check on the story and wow! three more chaps to read!!! Huzzah!! As usual you are right on target. Love this story and dreading but also anticipating the confrontation between Jack and Absolom V... and the back of my neck is tingling over what will transpire between Jack and Paige... Just please be sure not to deprive Jack and Jenny of each other too much. Pregnant sex has definite charms, and Jack deserves to discover them all!
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  • From ANON - PirateAurora on November 08, 2004
    Excellent battle!! I was absolutely rivetted to the page. Hmm, I hope jack and jenny are going to be fine though. Keep writing!!
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  • From ANON - Chelsey on November 08, 2004
    Oh Oh Oh!!! Can't wait Can't wait!!! You better update soon or I'm gonna be reeeeaallly angry! Hurry please, this is getting good!

    -Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful
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  • From ANON - PirateAurora on November 03, 2004
    Mmmmm, good stuff!! I hope that's not foreshadowing in Chapter 4 - if it is i'll boycott!! Not really. Keep on writing!!
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  • From ANON - Prolix on November 01, 2004
    Thank you so much for another great chapter! Today's my birthday, and I think it was one of the best presents I could have wanted. I've been reading your work forever and you never disappoint. I think you excel at showing how much Jack really loves Jen. It makes me almost jealous for a Jack of my own. Keep up the great work and know I'll be reading, whether I review or not. Thanks!
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  • From on October 27, 2004
    I knew it!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i knew you would I knew you would!!!!!!! Can't wait to read what happens next! When's your next update? Email me a notice. Awesome!!!!!!!
    oh and I want to know the email address with all the pirate names. Please let me know in the email.
    Update soon!

    -Chels- AKA: HisBeautiful
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  • From ANON - PirateAurora on October 24, 2004
    Ahhhh, good stuff!! The anticipation is killing me - how's she going to be punished??? You are a very talented writer and I'm enjoying your series immensely - please keep going!! And soon too!
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  • From ANON - Killer Kadoogan on October 24, 2004
    Wow! That was faster than I anticipated! Maybe I should ply you with ridiculous songs more often! Poor Jenny! Go easy on her! Happy writing! Tengo que irme! Salud! Killer K JGEL :)
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