Click Here!

Reviews for Of Revenge and Shattered Dreams

By : JennyPugh
  • From katrinacarvell on December 15, 2004
    Ooooo! Short, but smutty! I LOVE IT! ^.^ Glad to see Patience and Shay gettin' along nicely. ^.^ Love the Jack/Jenny interactions. *snuggles them* They're so cute. Again, a great chapter. I can't wait to get a visual of the furnished houses. I'm curious as to what will happen when Jenny and Patience go to buy furniture. Perhaps a kidnapping? I know Valentine's gotta be around somewhere. *looks in the bushes* Anyhow, great chappy, again. Can't wait for more! And, AS ALWAYS, Jenny+Pregnancy=TWINS! ^.^
    *loves*
    Kat
    Report Review

  • From ANON - PirateAurora on December 15, 2004
    Oh, for heavens sake don't make Jenny have twins!!!! Nothing kills the romance faster then 2 screaming babies with dirty nappies. Please let Jenny keep her sanity and Jack his lover.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - PirateAurora on December 15, 2004
    Just finished reading the last 3 new chapters and they were great!!! I'm suspecting perhaps that there's going to be something terribly exciting happening? That Valentine - if he upsets my favourite couple, I'll shake my fist at him!!! I will I swear. Keep writing please. I love your stories - they save me from dreary days.

    Report Review

  • From ANON - lexie on December 12, 2004
    The Fragrance Isles seem like a great place for Jenny and Patience. I hope that Jenny had twins! And I hope that the bailiff doesnt give them any trouble! Keep up the great work!
    Report Review

  • From katrinacarvell on December 12, 2004
    Oooooo. Very nice! *grins* I think that Jack should take his shirt off >.> Wouldn't that be nice? *gets lost into dirty fantasies* So yeah! Great chappy, love! Can't wait to read another! This one seemed a bit short. *pout* Ofcorse, I'm anxious for a description of the houses, some shamless smut, or plot action! Or Jenny's twins. You are considering making Jenny have twins, right? *evil smirk* Hm, yes. Positively can't wait for the next chappie, and will have to go off and content myself with reading the new Shay/Patience chapter! Which is coming along nicely, by the way. Well, keep it up darlin', and many dirty Jack dreams to ya!

    *loves*
    Kat
    Report Review

  • From katrinacarvell on December 11, 2004
    Nice chapter! It's nice to see a bit more depth to Patience, as opposed to the normal 'hellcat' image. ^.^ I'm also glad to see that they've reached Isle de Muerta. That means the action should be starting soon. As always, I'm still voting for twins! ^.^ Write more soon, and I can't wait for the next installment of the Shay/Patience story!!!

    *loves*
    Kat
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Killer Kadoogan on December 08, 2004
    `Nother great chapter! I like the Barbossa connection. And it's cool that Jack and Patience are gellin'. Never get so discouraged that you want to just quit the story- it's too good to be left unfinished! I know it must be time consuming, but you should know that all your loyal readers truly appreciate the effort. OK, enough mushy stuff! Update soon, mi chica! Tengo que irme! Salud! Killer K JGEL :)
    Report Review

  • From ANON - PirateAurora on December 07, 2004
    Please don't be mad Ani! You know we love you even if sometimes it isn't said. And we love Jack and Jenny too. Ok, especially Jack. REALLY LOVIN' Jack. Thank you for the chapters I always look forward to them and truly appreciate your work. Please continue with your wonderful story.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Killer Kadoogan on December 06, 2004
    OK! OK! Here's your frickin' review! Just kidding! I know reviews are encouraging and help keep the writing coming. I, too, found your latest chapters quite funny! Poor Jack! I believe he has met his match in Patience. And I'm glad Shay has found some love- I'm rooting for the Irishman, having ancestry from Ireland(hard to believe if you could hear my Southern drawl-pure Scarlett O'hara I'm afraid). Really excited to see where you're going with your story and I'm thoroughly enjoying your new characters. One greviance- make Jack's wound better! I fell so sorry for him! If you don't I shall insult you like a Frenchman! I will give you a little taste of my wrath if you don't do as I say-` Your mother was a hamster and your father smelled of elderberries!...... Now, go away or I shall taunt you a second time!' If you don't know what that's from you can not call yourself British! Hasta luego, mi chiquita! Tengo que irme! Salud! Killer K JGEL ;P
    Report Review

  • From ANON - lexie on December 06, 2004
    hey. great story. i just read "what jack sparrow wants" last week and now im all caught up. i love all three stories in the series, but im a bit confused by the last chapter. did shay and patience have sex or no? please let me know and keep up the great work!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Anon on December 05, 2004
    Hi

    Am loving this series!!! Keep posting!
    Report Review

  • From katrinacarvell on December 05, 2004
    Darling, darling, darling! Would I ever abandon ye?! Lol. Many apologies for my lack of reviewing, but my bloody cable company decided to be evil bitches and accidentally disconnect my internet for just about two weeks! Anyways, as always, I am loving the chapters. Absolutely adoring them! Shay is too damn cute for his own good, and Patience is quite the endearing spitfire. Jack and Jenny are perfect, and the little views of Pearl life, away from the plot, are charming. I can't wait to see what is in store for everyone, and I'm still voting for Jenny to have twins! Also, I'm in full support of Shay staying on the island with Jack, Jenny, and Patience. Especially because fecking Valentine knows where they'll be hiding and most likely will cause trouble. Am I right? Anyways. Beutiful chapters, and update soon! ^.^

    *Kat
    Report Review

  • From on December 03, 2004
    Jesus Bloody Christ! That was Bloody brilliant! I loved this chapter. Oh yes, I'M BACK!!!! Did you miss me my dear?? I do so love the funny stuff you put in here. The bit about the palm trees and the fire was hilarious! Oh and poor Shay! He's been attacked by Patience's Flaming Fists of Fury!!! We should nick name her Tiny Fists of Death. What do ya think?

    So I have major writer's block and I only have 3 pages written of my newest chapter! Gaaaaaaaaa! Help me if you can, please. Hey do you think you can be my Bata reader? I need some help sometimes when I'm stuck on an idea. Please let me know via email. Thanks and update soon!


    -Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful
    Report Review

  • From ANON - PirateAurora on November 29, 2004
    Oooooh it's getting tense!!! We definately need more chapters! Be sure to exercise your gift often - um, that would be writing ya perv.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Killer Kadoogan on November 28, 2004
    Sorry for the tardy! Alas, life has taken over of late and I have had little time for my stories. Why must I be burdened with a job and other various, quiet tedious tasks of "normal" life. I whole heartedly(spell check?) believe that I was meant to marry a rich man and live my life eating bon-bons and reading smutty stories all day while the nanny watches my child! OK I'm rambling, must be the killer headache I've had for FOUR FRICKIN' DAYS! Hope you had a satisfactory turkey day(lucky for you I don't have a Thanksgiving song), mine was de-lish! As always some great writing going on. I am thoroughly captivated by the twists. Glad you gave Shay a woman, I like that she has attitude! But suddenly I'm apprehensive- I just really paid attention to the title of this story and the "Shattered Dreams" part has me worried for Jack and Jenny. And the fate of the babe as well. Hope all works out for them. Well, as always I will be awaiting more updates, though I understand if they come a little late what with all the holiday madness that's about to descend upon us all. Oh, the horror of the mall!!! Happy shopping anyway and keep writing! As always I remain a loyal reader(though sometimes negligent with the reviews). Tengo que irme! Salud! Killer K JGEL:)
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!