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Reviews for Take Me Home

By : redautumn
  • From ANON - dark az on January 18, 2005
    LOvely story. Love your writing.
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  • From ANON - Alexial on January 18, 2005
    Please update. i wanna know what happens next XD!
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  • From ANON - thesadness on January 02, 2005
    great!!
    mmmm blue eyes??
    ok

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  • From ANON - Amby on January 01, 2005
    This was so great! There's gonna be more, right?!
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  • From ANON - Yana on December 31, 2004
    nooooooo tell Accillies
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  • From ANON - Masquerade on December 18, 2004
    I'm so glad you updated! The relationship between these two is master/slave but it almost seems to me like lover/lover. You are a great writer. This reminds me of the Sleeping Beauty trilogy by Anne Rice. If you've ever read it, you will know what I mean. And that is meant as a compliment. Good job!
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  • From ANON - Yana on December 17, 2004
    I LOVED THAT CHAPTER
    i can't wait for the next
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  • From ANON - Yana on November 16, 2004
    noooo please don't kill hecter
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  • From ANON - Masquerade on November 10, 2004
    I love this story! Anything with Paris in it I love! And the Achilles/Paris pairing is great! I hope you update very soon!
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  • From ANON - Yana on October 27, 2004
    OMG is Paris ok
    cool chappy
    kill aichilles's son
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  • From ANON - McFee on October 24, 2004
    I really like how youv'e built in the character of Patrocolus and made him so jealous, that gives a real edge to the Achilles/Paris relationship, and in your story this is a real threat. I also like the fact that you've got Paris off the Trojan beaches so quickly, it moves the story away from the film very effectively: poor Paris so beautiful, so vunerable. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - evil_little_girl on October 23, 2004
    All right...I feel like I have to explain something. Believe it or not, "Jamaica" is my cousin, Kasia (Kate), who is staying at my house until her parents will come back from Germany and however embarrassing that is, I wrote her review mf. If. I never read „Take me home” since I don’t have time to read any fanfics lately. I’m in the last year of high school and I’m drowning in work. She asked me to write her some review since English is not our native language and she has some problems with writing. We’re both into “Troy” slash so I told her to read few of my favourite fics on AdultFanFic. That’s when she read your story. She told me that th alr already had some nasty reviews and that she was not the only one thinking that way. She was nagging me about it so I wrote it, even though I thought it was wrong, to have some peace. However now, when I read the story I can’t believe that I did it and I am truly sorry for translating her words. I feel terrible. Maybe it’s stupid but I feel even worse knowing that she used my own computer. If it’s any good, she said some cruel things about my own fics too. I usually never show them to anyone and they are not published anywhere since I don’t have the time to find myself a beta and I can’t just sit and check them myself because I have some major problems with grammar (you probably noticed that already ;P). Plus I’m kinda afraid to send them. So it was even more uping ing to hear that they are bad. Anyway I just wanted to let you know that she won’t get anywhere near my computer and I personally think that your story is great and that you should continue. So keoingoing Red Autumn and don't ever let someone like "Jamaica" stop you. I only regret that this someone, is a person from my own family. :*
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  • From ANON - Sagittarius on October 23, 2004
    After seeing the reviews for this, and since my own fic is coming to an end, I thought I'd sit down and have a good read - and Red Autumn you don't disappoint. Nice story, well written, with lots of good bits to make me blush ;)

    To Jamaica - your review is both incorrect and rude and if it had been me I would have deleted it for its inaccuracies. The plotline between Achilles and Paris did not begin with Solytayre, wonderful writer that she is. In mythology Achilles a lua lusty warrior, attracted to beautiful young men - Patroclus, Troilus etc, and he didn't like to take no for an answer. Hence most fics will portray him forcefully taking Paris, the most beautiful man alive who was renowned for his love of women, not men and would therefore reject Achilles as both enemy and male. Crazyundeadfairy with her fantastic epic 'Will More Strongly' has gotten around this plot device by having the two meet earlier before the war and before they were enemies. I was going to use the same idea, Achilles forcing himself upon Paris initially, until I read One Little Mistake and changed tact.

    Anyway, enough blathering, great story Red Autumn and don't let anyone tell you otherwise, look forward to reading more soon :)
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  • From ANON - Yana on October 22, 2004
    I love this story
    God i hate Patroclus
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  • From ANON - Yana on October 22, 2004
    God i hate Patroclus
    i love this story
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