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Reviews for Just the Beginning

By : rainbowbrite
  • From Goblingirlsarah on January 14, 2024

    Hell nah! His "people" are whoever the fuck he chooses, ma'am. That means Vaako is his people, too. I'm unhappy with Mother Soryn...


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  • From on March 10, 2011
    Oh beautiful story that I love to see Riddick decides to take the kids and the best thing always Vaako would live together and congratulate you for this love story.
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  • From myladymystere on May 31, 2009
    very much liking this fic. Vaako is a bit stronger here than in other stories and I like that. Riddick sounds very much like Riddick. Looking forward to reading the rest of this.
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  • From fairietayle on March 02, 2009
    The only bad thing I can say about the storu is that the ending, the fight with the phantoms, felt rushed.
    Otherwise, I have no complaints what-so-ever ^-^
    I'm glad that everything sorted out and we got a happy ending :D

    And I hope you never stop writing, because this was very enjoyable and, simply put, GOOD ;D
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  • From fairietayle on March 02, 2009
    Happiness looks good on Vaako and Riddick ^-^
    And I'm happy the deal with the Phantoms is starting to be behind us so that Riddick may go and rule and Vaako can be his spouse ^-^
    Who needs battles when you have happiness on your fingertips?
    ...Well, Riddick might, but we'll arrange him someone to spar with him safely, so that he won't have to get hurt and that way hurt Vaako :)
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  • From fairietayle on March 02, 2009
    Oaaws, Riddick and Vaako have a pet ^-^ And a cute and dangerous one at that. Now all that's missing is that they adopt Rayna and Trey :) Vaako seems to be suprisingly good with children ;)
    The smut was once again... Brain melting :)
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  • From fairietayle on March 02, 2009
    Yayness! Victory!!
    Now the bitch mother has no right to interfere ^-^ And Riddick shall be Vaako's forever!! Muhahhahhaa!!
    *coughs*
    It was nicely written. Especially the smut. And I liked that while completing the binding ritual they couldn't reach climax until Vaako spoke the last words :) It was a very nice touch ^-^
    Oh, and the girl who saw Vaako was a furyan, was very cute ^-^
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  • From fairietayle on March 02, 2009
    Oh, must you hurt Vaako so? It makes my heart ache for him... And that's pretty good considering they aren't even "real" people...o.0
    The Mother is a bitch. She should just take herself elsewhere with her scheming and half-baked match-making.
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  • From fairietayle on March 02, 2009
    Augh! You can't do this to Vaako and Riddick!! >_< It's cruel to rip them apart! For all we know the whole prophesy could be the furyans plot to tie Riddick to them and have his babies! Vaako, don't trust them!!

    Nicely done, by the way ;D
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  • From fairietayle on March 02, 2009
    Well... When the sex finally happened in chapter 6, you'd think it would be all over and done with.
    Luckily it isn't ^-^
    The trip to Furyan was nicely timed; the way you started foreshadowing a few chapters beforehand so it doesn't pop out of nowhere and make it seem forced (like you don't want the story to end yet and just made something up). The story continues on nicely and smoothly ^-^
    Now I have to wonder what problems will crop up... A Furyan mate for Riddick? Someone to take out Vaako while Riddick is away?
    MUST READ MORE!!
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  • From fairietayle on March 02, 2009
    I just finished reading chapter 5 and I must say I like the slow build up, how Vaako and Riddick don't just jump in to bed right away.
    I also like how you're slowly changing the necros, showing what they're missing. It gives the story more substance and makes it more believable.
    And definately more enjoyable ^-^
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  • From fairietayle on February 25, 2009
    Oh, the sexual tension in chapter four... It made me purr =(^-^)=
    It almost makes me want to keep on reading instead of sleeping, but since I'm already sleep-deprived and I have to be up and going in six hours and tomorrow's an important day, I must leave reading your amazing fic to a later time ;)
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  • From fairietayle on February 25, 2009
    Oh my my... The changes are fun and it doesn't seem like you forgot anything. :D
    Already at chapter three you can sense the budding relationship between Riddick and Vaako, and I like the fact tha Riddick doesn't have a 180 degree turn in the blink of an eye about his thoughts on Vaako. The build up is going nicely indeed :)
    I can only hope you keep up the good work ;)
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  • From fairietayle on February 25, 2009
    Ooooooh... *-*
    Isn't this a gem?

    I liked how you portrayed the characters in the beginning; how Riddick is disstrustful of and a little resentful to Vaako, and how Vaako still wants to be the best of use to his Lord.
    And it's good to start slowly and then build it up on a solid foundation.

    Now, I must go read more...;D
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  • From Maco on September 27, 2008
    Wow!

    I really love your story. It's so totally sweet, hot, and full of suspense; all at the same time. It's also the only COR story I've come across that really gives a solution to the mess Riddick finds himself in.
    I mean - he suddenly has the responsibility for not only an entire race, but for the whole effing universe thrust upon him. Surely that should be worth mentioning in a story... not an easy feat at all, I have to admit, but everything being all lovey-dovey just doesn't cut it, imho.

    But you somehow managed to tie up all those loose ends the film left us hanging with in a mightily fine way. And did I mention the hotness?
    And somehow, to top it all, everybody seems in-character, with minor (but believable) allowances made due to the development of the characters.

    So - I hope I can look forward to reading more from you *hint, hint*!

    Maco
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