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Reviews for Just the Beginning

By : rainbowbrite
  • From ANON - vinchildy on February 01, 2005
    I love your story. riddick and vaako was hot!hot!.
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  • From ANON - :) on January 23, 2005
    thank you, my little love bunny
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  • From ANON - :) on January 22, 2005
    in part 5 it seems to jump from the social gathering to vaakos past, without really flowing. I don't know if this was the intention or if there have been problems with the site to cause this, so if you could fix i would actually be in love with you cause this is the best fanfic i have ever read
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  • From ANON - . on January 14, 2005
    i love this story
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  • From ANON - Andante on January 03, 2005
    Wow! I really enjoyed this story. I love how you wrote Vaako and Riddick, and I love the direction and pace you took with their relationship. You also intertwined an intriguing plot line along with the love story. This story had a beautiful ending but I really hope you will continue it in a sequel. Wonderful piece!
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  • From ANON - Emily on December 31, 2004
    So thats the End........wow what a journey.........god your story is like epic man. i loved every bit of it!! R u going to write a sequel? I could so see Riddick playing daddy to his tow kids lol with Vaako as the good little house wife *Starts laughing*
    Man i am too easily amused.
    Luved it all chica
    !!eMIlY!!
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  • From ANON - silver_sun on December 31, 2004
    To Ryuuza, my actually reasons for getting rid of the hair are much simpler. Vaako's hairstyle just annoyed the crap out of me. ;D But, Vaako's hair grows back in the story, and you can check out the actor who plays him with short hair at http://www.karl-urban.com. Happy reading! :)
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  • From ANON - Ryuuza on December 26, 2004
    why did you shave his head?!?!?! aaaahhhh my eyes. x_x i can see that you were try ing to link V's shaving of the head to Riddick's at the beginning of the movie but V looks bad with one. Dont try to link like that. I think we have suffucent linkage with the fact that Kyra is dead, R is head and V is in the picture.
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  • From ANON - Emily on December 22, 2004
    *squeals* ohhhhh yay yay you wrote another chappy that is sooooooo good....and i luv it too.
    I can't wait for the next one......gwad Vaako and Riddick r sooooo hot
    Neway i luv ur writing chica and i can't wait until the next update :)
    Have a good holiday
    !!eMIlY!!
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  • From ANON - Emily on December 10, 2004
    OMG!!!!
    this is sooooo the BEST fic ever!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    I absolutely love it man it is sooo awesome. The plot, the bonding, the pair, the giant cat thingy. It just all Rocks. And your smut scenes are worthy of goddess status. YOU ROCK MAN!!!! I CANNOT wait until the next chapter!!!
    Love It Goddess
    !!eMIlY!!

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  • From on November 28, 2004
    love this whole story, very well written, wish it was the script for the next movie. Continuing this will make alot of fans exstatic. Take care and good reading...
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  • From ANON - Verwelkenden on November 27, 2004
    I love the 11th chapter! As I've already said about in every post, I can't wait for the next chapter. This is a beautiful story you've got going.
    ~Ver
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  • From ANON - zakhyn on November 21, 2004
    wow. more--definitely more as soon as you are able.
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  • From ANON - Verwelkenden on November 20, 2004
    Wow... I love the twist this story has taken. And once more, as I've said so many times, I can't for the coming chapters. You've got a real talent for writing and I want to see more of it. Keep up the great work, and thanks for keeping us on the edge!
    ~Ver
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  • From ANON - duchess on November 18, 2004
    a really well put together story, and i love Riddick/Vaako, great pairing!

    Update soon, this is a great fic!
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