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Reviews for Just the Beginning

By : rainbowbrite
  • From Vex on September 28, 2007
    This is an amazing fic!
    I was in awe through the whole thing.
    You've got the best Riddick/Vaako smut.
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  • From Takhen on September 22, 2007
    NOOOO!!!!! You shaved Vakko's HAIR!!! How could you???
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  • From ANON - Joieimani on August 02, 2006
    What an excellent story, staying true to the characters we know yet expanding on the universe. Well done!
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  • From ANON - HarleyD on January 14, 2006
    SQUEEEEEE!!

    That story was incredible. It was so... so... sheesh. I'm so happy now!

    I was a little nervous there for a moment - things looked to be going bad and there wasn't much story left and I was all like.. OH NO!

    It was wonderful, thank you so much for writing it!
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  • From ANON - Harleyd on January 14, 2006
    heya! I just finished chapter 9 (which i mention because it annoys me to all hell that this site doesn't say what chapter hte review is from and I have no idea what the reader is joyful/angry about) I love your story so much! And that stupid stupid trying to take Riddick away from Vaako. Poor guy, i just want him to be able to be with the one he cares about. Great story (its always a pleasure when i find a fanfiction writer that understand the concept of a plot.)

    Can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - Doppelfisch on October 28, 2005
    *claps* yaaay! That was loads of fun! I would say that if the Hollywood media didn't take such a squeamish postion on two men in a romantic setting, that this would have made a damn good sequel! I was entertained from the beginnig, and sucked into the story really fast! And may I say, you have a great way of writing the sex scenes, very visceral and natural :D

    As this was my second Riddick/Vaako fic reading, may I say that I haven't been let down yet, this was just as wonderful as the last fic I read!

    Thank you and you did an absolutely wonderful job!!!
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  • From ANON - Sandy on October 12, 2005
    This was so good! I loved everyu minute of it. And you really do have a way with your sex scenes, holy hell i think my mouse almost melted in my hand.
    Thank you!
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  • From ANON - flore on October 03, 2005
    oh my god!!!!!! that was so hot. i mean the story and the way ttheir relationship developed,it was so nice. the way you described it made me really belive the events actually happening. if a movie was made out of this then i would watch it. thank you soooooooooooooo much. i haven't read that good a story for a while. if you have time do you think you could write a sequel? it doesn't even have to be long just to catch up on them. that would be very cool. thanks again.
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  • From ANON - Raythe on September 01, 2005
    Brilliant. Nicely written with a good balance of romance and action. The characters were ... in character! I loved your idea to go back to Furya and the Phantoms. You've outdone Mr. Twohy quite well.
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  • From Dieselsaliva on August 22, 2005
    This was a great story!!!
    I loved your way of perceiving Riddick's heritage and the 'Furyia' race.
    My first time reading a Riddick slash story and I was so completely
    impressed. =]

    ~B~
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  • From ANON - Daisy on June 20, 2005
    Wow! I have to compliment! that was a great story! If only there were more stories like yours!! I loved it!
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  • From ANON - aurora on June 14, 2005
    WOW!!!! I really really liked this story....it was very cool how you closed the story dealing with the Furyans and Necromongers finding their own planet and the whole underverse deal being a lie.....once again wow....
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  • From ANON - Genna on May 04, 2005
    I found your story fascinating for a number of reasons. 1. You framed Riddick's personality in such a way that there would be no question that he would choose Vaako in the first place. (I would say there would be some doubt in people's minds who abhor slash. ME? I enjoyed it.) 2. You did not spend a lot of time in Riddick's head trying to figure out what he was thinking and why he was thinking what he was thinking. (I realize most of the story was from Vaako's POV but a lot of writers devote endless space to that. I wondered how Riddick drifted from lack of trust to swallowing Vaako whole but it wasn't enough to distract me.) 3. I didn't know how the story would change from minute to a next. (I thought it was a nice touch that the Queen Mother thought she was helping Riddick to his destiny by dismissing Vaako only to find later that she took the prophecy too literally.)

    I hesitate to mention what I wasn't feeling in the story but I will...once you had me committed lock, stock and barrel to your story line why not tell me the reader about the internal sturggles which were taking place across the Necromonger Fleet. Surely Vaako, no matter how loyal and how submissive to Riddick Vaako became, would take apart the society piece by piece remaking it in his image. He would not leave that detail amiss especially since Riddick was shaking up their order.

    I have met enough gay, bisexual, and men of an undeclared sexuality to know that their sexuality drives them to be just as dominant in their professional roles as men who sleep with women. Their careers would not a take back seat to being the top of their field. While he was away from Riddick or even while he was with him, he would have had to angle in different ways to keep other from attacking Riddick while Riddick explored Furya..

    Dame Vaako and others were far too treacherous for them not to be at Riddick's throat.

    I think I like your story as well I did because you took a position and kept moving forward in it.
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  • From ANON - Pandorag on March 15, 2005
    I loved it very, very, very much! Thanks a lot for a good show!
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  • From ANON - scyllablue on February 28, 2005
    Absolutely lovely. I enjoyed the conflicts between Riddick's past and expected duties, and his own expectations. Your Vaako was yummy, or certainly sounded it, and I think you nailed him with his dedication to his perceived responsibilities. The pace seemed to rush towards the end, but fourteen chapters just seemed too short when there is so little good fiction for this movie.
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