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Reviews for As Insipid As Love

By : AgentSekhmet
  • From ANON - alexandra on March 05, 2005
    I have been following this story since chapter one and I have to say the ending was quite intense. Very good work!
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  • From ANON - Nicolina on March 04, 2005
    Ohh, beautiful! And so heavy! And so very understandable and reasonable! Thankyou so much for this beautiful story. I love it!
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  • From ANON - Nicolina on February 17, 2005
    Yay! Finally! This chapter was a lot less sad than the last ones, and very enjoyable indeed. Thanks L. :-)
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  • From ANON - Nicolina on February 03, 2005
    My oh my! He´s evil allright, and her fate... It kills me!

    Thankyou for another exciting chapter/ Nic.
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  • From ANON - Nicolina on January 23, 2005
    Ohhh, I have to review again. I´m heartbroken, for her, for their child, for Jones and even for Smith... And I´m so in to this story, it´s so exciting!
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  • From ANON - Waiting on January 22, 2005
    Please continue
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  • From on January 17, 2005
    I am totally stunned by this story! I´ve stayed up way too late several nights in a row now to read it. I finished ch 25 last night and found to my surprise and joy ch 26 today! Keep up the excellent work. Have you written anything else? Here or at some other site?
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  • From ANON - smithsbabe65 on December 06, 2004
    Wonderful, absolutely wonderful. You have such a powerful gift to convey deep emotion. Bronwyn's inner conflict about her feelings for Jones and Smith was insightfully written, a job well done. I bow down to you, m'lady. Keep the chapters coming!
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  • From ANON - smithsbabe65 on November 08, 2004
    Bravo! Bravo! Encore! *whistles and applause* You've blown me away! You've done a great job with the encounter between "father and son". The two of them are such arrogant bastards, and you've managed to capture that aspect of their personalities perfectly.

    GREAT JOB!!!! Keep it coming!


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  • From ANON - smithsbabe65 on October 27, 2004
    OH - MY- GOD!!!!! More, you must write more! That last part about Smith actually "feeling" what was going on between Jones and Bronwyn was the icing on the cake! This is the supremely best chapter you've written!

    BTW: Tell the Orcale that I want chocolate chip cookies this time!
    The movies were Men in Black (how appropriate) and Die Hard.

    You Know Who!
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  • From ANON - Cecilia on October 12, 2004
    Hey girl,

    This is your fav beta reader here! You know I couldn't pass up the chance to tell once again what I think of this epic you've created! To all you other readers out there! Please read and review this story. It is one of the most original and freshest Smith fan fics out there. Maybe I'm a little biased because the author is a pal of mine, but her story is wonderful!

    Stop blushing girl, you know you're good!

    C.
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  • From ANON - autumnphilia on October 12, 2004
    I skipped the rape scene so I can't give you any feedback on that, but the overall fic is quite good. I thought you dealt with the eftermath of the rape well, and showed respect to your female character. She's a strong appealing character. The only criticism I have is that Smith is almost too much of a villian while Jones is almost too good. They both did the same wicked things, yet they have turned out totally different. It's really a small thing, it's totally plausible that Jones might fall in love an therefore want to change, but maybe it would be more gradual. Or prehaps you could emphasize that while he raped women, it was pure duty and he took no pleasure in it. That feeling comes through anyway, that he didn't enjoy it at all. Fab job on Persephone, it seemed just like her to torment him and opens the possibility of him changing, though I'm sure Bronwyn will still hate him regardless. Just be torment to him, which he of course deserves. Good job.
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  • From ANON - Monica on October 11, 2004
    Wow this is such a great story very fresh! I really enjoy reading this story and hope you post more real soon!
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