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Reviews for The real treasure

By : Mahierj
  • From Silverwindfara on November 20, 2007
    Great story!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 29, 2006
    It's extremely well thought in the beginning and middle but I am sorry to say that the ending lacks that certain "je ne sais quoi". Please keep writing though.
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  • From ANON - reb Riddle on October 01, 2005
    iv read menny jack/will fics but this one seemed more real ( realer? =P) i love it wonderful work
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  • From ANON - fuzzy on September 12, 2004
    So endering, I am in love with Jack and Will all over again! Thank you for that! I absolutely loved it!
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  • From PyroKleptomaniacs on September 11, 2004
    Lillia AKA 1/2 of the PKmaniacs
    (The Pyromaniac, if you're wondering)

    okay...that was...i dont know...it was just...wonderful. the writing was done extremely well. it had a beat and smoothness to it that just made the story flow perfectly. the wording was great. i just...loved it. the ending was perfect. the idea was deep, and the way your wrote everything was quite fresh and original. the look into how and why will felt left out was great...it made complete sense and kept true to everyone's character, because i dont imagine elizabeth would be adventurous after her marriage. the way you explained the differences between the rich and the pirates, jack and elizabeth, how they felt for gold and beauty...i just found it deep and meaningful and i dont know...good. it was all very...perfect. i find no problems at all with it. awesome job. (sorry for drabbling, its early in the morning haha)

    ~Remember, fire is dangerous to those who dont play with it all the time~
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