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Reviews for Whisper Your Weakness

By : kayladie
  • From ANON - LarielRomeniel on March 25, 2005
    Yay! Another chapter! But you know it's not enough...:-)
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 24, 2005
    Well you have worked on the suspense, never would have though He was a psychotic because luke killed his father in some unfortunate accidnet or another. If you take as long to update again we might have to start picketing outside of your house, so... HURRY UP PLEASE!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 19, 2005
    A story that I find suprisingly good. I hope for more later, and your right I dont think anyone actually belived he was dead, seemed really anticlimatic if he was.
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  • From on March 19, 2005
    Kayladie, where are you?! I'm dying waiting for the next chapter! This story is just wonderful.
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  • From ANON - Angel_mine on January 16, 2005
    Kayladie,

    You should be proud - I usually don't cry - and it takes a really good story for me to admit it!!

    Chapter 18 was very good. I'm interested to see where you're taking the Berdin character and to find out where his hatred of Luke stems from. And ew, ick!! Licking Luke's ear - Luke's repulsed feeling was felt all around! I'm afraid of what other icky actions might befall him from this psychotic "Doctor".

    I don't foresee a quick rescue for Luke, but I am glad that the gang is now aware that it wasn't really Luke who died. I am curious to see how you explain the Luke double. Also - how did Berdin keep Luke subdued for so long - did he really blast him then heal him? Or is Luke still suffering from a blaster wound?

    Typical Luke to worry about his family and them being worried about him. Also, it was right in character for him to worry about little Syal and his friend Wedge. Nice touch. But he needs to be worried about himself right now!

    Looking forward to Chapter 19!!!
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  • From ANON - DMS on January 16, 2005
    Beautifully written, although I am not happy about Luke being tortured. I would hate to be Viktor when Mara gets her hands on him. I cannot wait until our two lovers are reunited. I hope it happens soon!! Great job!
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  • From ANON - Angel_mine on January 14, 2005
    I knew it! I knew it!!! Absolutely wonderful chapter - amazing that Mara would be the one to finally notice that it was not really Luke. Perfect having Talon and Han hanging back and watching over Mara. I can't wait to see where you're taking us next!!
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  • From ANON - Dan on January 09, 2005
    Awesome story. I cannot wait for your next chapter. I hope its soon!
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  • From ANON - Abby on January 08, 2005
    It was a toss up, actually, between fake!Luke and miraculously-comes-back-to-life!Luke ;)

    Good update - a nice thing to come home to after a morning at work and an afternoon of shovelling snow. Brrrrrr.
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  • From ANON - DMS on January 07, 2005
    WOW!! I love this!! Now I am happy!! You are such an excellent writer! I cannot get enough of this story. It is fantastic! Keep up the good work!!! I anxiously look forward to an update!!
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  • From ANON - DMS on January 05, 2005
    [Subliminal message] UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, PLEEEEESSSEEEE!!!! [End subliminal message]
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  • From ANON - Abby on January 03, 2005
    *sobs*

    Wow, you really know how to twist a plot around, don't you?

    -Leia in the bedroom, wow. The cutting of the hair, and her resolve to welcome the mystery woman into their family. Me likes.

    -Mara and Leia on the balcony. Really, how would she say that *she* was the mystery woman? Kind of difficult thing to tell Leia, to find the right words. You know I said "Noo!!" when they were interrupted just as she was about to say it.

    -Karrde at the end, ever the knowing one. Perfect for him to offer her his support.

    Anyway, awesome couple of posts - I'm waiting anxiously for the next installment!
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  • From ANON - Angel_mine on January 02, 2005
    What luck! Another chapter!

    This was a many tissue chapter! The "Little brother..." bantering as Leia remembers is so touching. (Okay - I cried, I admit it.) And Leia cutting her hair, and cutting off the last ties to her 'family' is very powerful. Then needing to get to Luke's apartment to find the ring was heartbreaking. (Cried again...can't lie.)

    I so wanted Mara to reveal to Leia her relationship with Luke. And inviting Mara to ride with the family to Luke's memorial service is so touching - regardless of her intimate relationship, they were the best of friends.

    And poor Wedge - the guilt he and Iella must be feeling. I'm glad you didn't forget about them completely after using Wedge as your plot device. I'm a personal Wedge fan, especially when dealing with his friendship with Luke.

    Looking forward to more!! I've got a new box of Kleenex sitting by my pc.
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  • From ANON - DMS on December 31, 2004
    Once again, another wonderfully written chapter. It is extremely sad, but very good. I am going to assume that there will be a twist somewhere that will bring our two lovers back together. I just hope this doesn’t go the route of “Romeo and Juliet”. Then I will be very unhappy. Please don't do that! PLEEESSSEEEE!!! Come on, you don’t want me to go all “Annie Wilkes” on you like in the movie “Misery” when her favorite character was killed off.-- “I am your number one fan”. :p (Just kidding!!)

    This is one of my favorite Luke/Mara stories I have ever read. Please keep up the good work. I hope next year brings some more great chapters. Great job Kayladie!!!!

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  • From ANON - Angel_mine on December 30, 2004
    Blink... Wait, this can't be right! No...No...NO!!

    This is fantastic - in a horrifying way. I can't believe you killed LUKE! But was it really Luke?? Why did the doctor want his DNA sample way back when?? Is it a clone that was left?

    Poor Wedge, he gets his little girl back but at the cost of one of his best friends. OMG - Leia, Han & the Solo kids - just awful. And what will Mara do? And no-one knows how involved she and Luke were...

    Wow - this is great! And the last two chapters came out one right after the other - bam, bam. I can't wait for more...really, I can not wait - you've got me hanging by a thin thread.

    Excellent work! :-)
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