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Reviews for Whisper Your Weakness

By : kayladie
  • From ANON - AgiVega on August 10, 2005
    AAAAHHHH! Dark Side Luke! How very exciting! :))) Glad to see Viktor dead!
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  • From ANON - Mara Look-a-like on August 10, 2005
    OMG poor lukie. He just can not go to the dark side, that would be aweful. Well he has his Mara. Please let his friends & loved ones be good enough to help him recover.
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  • From ANON - angel_mine on August 09, 2005
    Whoohoo!! The rescue team finally arrives! Loved that Luke got Viktor - dark side be damned! I can't wait to see how you treat his recovery. I would think it's going to be a bit of a long-haul on the recovery after such a horrifyingly traumatic experience. I can see poor Luke's psyche having suffered quite a blow.

    I've said it before, I'll say it again - I love this piece of artful fiction.
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  • From ANON - angel_mine on August 06, 2005
    Well Kayladie, I went back and re-read from chapter 1 to 22 last week - and I must say this is such a fantastic story! I think I already sent you my kudos for ch22. Now that I've had a chance to read ch22 again, the last part has me somewhat worried. Did you just have Luke die? Or was it a mental break? Now I really am anxious for the gang to find Luke and really dish out some severe punishment to Viktor. I wish Luke were to get a little of his strength back so that he could give Viktor a blow into next week, but somehow I think you might have that reserved for someone else. If/when the gang finds Luke, I can totally see Mara, Han & Wedge going ballistic and ready to take out Viktor with their bare hands.

    Looking forward to your next chapter! As always, bravo!!!
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  • From ANON - Cherry! on August 03, 2005
    Wait... just... gimme a minute... I can't see the screen when my eyes are blurred with tears. It's awful. I mean, what Luke's going through. It's so awful because the writing's so good. I didn't think that I could feel any worse for Luke, but the way his personality itself starts to deteriorate... (sob) And now there's this whole new dimension to the story: Will Luke be the same when he gets free? I worry 'bout him. And also, three cheers for our favorite Princess! And for Dr. Mondahl, as well! Good for them. Brownie points all around. Now Mara can beat the Hell out of Viktor. I wish many bad things upon him- like I hope he loses his car keys and twists his ankle just before he has a run-in with Mara's lightsaber. And then I hope Luke gives him a very painful Force-Whammy thingamadooger. (Veangeful? Me?)
    It made me SO happy to see that you'd put up new chapters. Really. Like "(gasp!) (choke on mouthful of water!) (drop everything and read!)" type happy. Just know that you have a very strong fan population out here, Ms Author. And right now, it's a very happy one... happy in a totally sympathetic-to-Luke kind of way.
    Happy writings to you!
    -Cherry!
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  • From ANON - - on August 03, 2005
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  • From ANON - simon22cat on July 30, 2005
    Smut? I missed the smut? Well...I am most definitely going back and reading the rest of this.

    Great chapter. Leia and the rest need to hurry and rescue Luke before this goes any further.
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  • From ANON - Mara Look-a-like on July 28, 2005
    Ok I am miledly confused. I know Luke was raped, but where is he, where can Vickor not find him. Will Mara & all them make it to Luke in time or will they only find another body just this time it is not a clone. I really enjoy this story, Please update soon.















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  • From ANON - Jake on July 28, 2005
    this is truly an excellent story! Viktor is one of the best drawn serial killer-type villains I've read... Poor Luke! Please let Mara kick Viktor's butt, and keep up the excellent writing!
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  • From ANON - DMS on July 18, 2005
    Viktor is just pure evil. In a way I am glad that he told Luke he was going to take Mara as his next victim. Because now Luke has a reason to hang on. Please let Mara rescue my beautiful Farmboy. If anybody in the EU deserves happiness it is Luke. Plus I want to get back to reading about Forced-Enhanced boot knocking!!! Great update!!

    ~DMS~
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  • From ANON - Jules on July 13, 2005
    ARRRRGH!!! IT'S SO GOOD!!! HOW THE HELL AM I SUPPOSED TO SLEEP TONGHT WITH THIS ON MY MIND?! ARRR! WRITE FASTER!
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  • From ANON - Yanic on July 12, 2005
    Omg this is truly excellent!! Please Update soon I can't wait to see what happens. I can't stand the Luke torture!
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  • From ANON - fdisk on July 12, 2005
    I'm impressed! where did you get this streak of sadism from??? I thought I had some good Ideas for luke but... :D niiiice.

    love the story! I've read it a few times now, it doesn't get boring - though I do want you to get more chapters up :)

    Keep writing!
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  • From simon22cat on July 11, 2005
    Well. What to say? This is the first fic I have came across at this site that has made me want to leave a review. Even though I have only read the first three chapters and then skipped to the end and read the last three or four chapters, all I have to say is...you have one hell of a story here. This is probably one of the better stories I have had the fortune to run across on this site. Your portrayal of the Star Wars characters seem so right. I am going to have to go back and read the rest of the chapters when I have the time. Keep up the good work.

    *Now for the fangirl part*
    LIKE OMG!!!1!!!U R SO MEAN FOR STOPPING LIKE THAT!!1!!!POOR LUKE!!!!11!!!!SOMEONE SAVE HIM!!!!111!!!!
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  • From ANON - riam on July 11, 2005
    fuck, i realy hate your viktor character, i hope he dies very painfully.
    Is luke going to be free soon?


    seeya
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