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Reviews for Whisper Your Weakness

By : kayladie
  • From draconus on January 03, 2008
    That was wonderful. I'm actually sad that it's over but I loved the climax of him trying to kill himself and her telling him she would die, too, if he did. Brilliant move on her part.

    Loved that Luke was finally open enough to admit what had happened and that it led to a breakthrough. I think the last two chapters were my favorites, only because the angst factor and then the amorous aftermath were just so emotionally satisfying.

    The epilogue was cute. Glad to see that they finally married and had kids.

    Very well done! I enjoyed it a lot.
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  • From draconus on December 29, 2007
    This was absolutely wonderful. I love the way you built the tension on the last couple of chapters, the way Mara kept after Luke but with subtle means and the way Luke was fighting himself trying to keep away from her and yet not.

    Loved it. Hope you update soon!
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  • From kingme2121 on September 30, 2007
    ever gona finish it ,
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  • From slygriff21 on September 29, 2007
    OMG! I love this story! You have me hooked! I can't wait to read more. It's just been recently that I've started reading Mara/Luke fanfiction. Your story is the best I've read so far. I hope you update again and soon. If it's not too much troble, could you e-mail me when you've udated? my e-mail is serenadarienp@yahoo.com

    Thanks,
    Tiffany
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  • From DMS88 on September 28, 2007
    Oh wow, that meeting between Mara and Luke was intense. It pains me to see him trying to shut her out of his life like this. They need to knock boots and start the healing process!!!

    Excellent chapter!
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  • From MaraJade001 on August 11, 2007
    Wow! This is a great story! PLEASE update soon! I can't bear not knowing what's going to happen next!
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  • From dlsky1 on July 09, 2007
    This story was a very well done and passionent storyline, I do hope that you would continue it onward. Some ideas perhaps in helping you to continue this would be for 1. Luke to go to Vaders Castle as a place of refuge and solace. 2. Mara to come looking for him and almost be lost in hope to where he went. (searching Tatooine, perhaps Byss (dont' know about that one) But one of the things that would be a very good part of this tale is that at the end when Mara does find him...she reverses roles with him in the bedroom scene...where he asks her to share her Weaknesses with him and she her strengths, that she askes him to share his weaknesses with her and she will offer her strengths. (which I sure is your whole purpose to this story plot line) still I have enjoyed reading all this and do wish to convay my thanks for sharing with us such a wonderful story and to ask that if at all possible please continue to finish and conclude such a wonderful piece of work. thanks dlsky
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  • From ANON - DMS on December 08, 2006
    Wonderful story, but I am still waiting for an update!!!
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  • From ANON - Alyx on August 09, 2006
    I would say that I loved your fic but some of it was to dark and agntsy for me to actually say that, you know? It was beautifully written and everything was very close to the mark, I found few errors in this fic, and I know hwo rare it is to come across a piece like this, somthing dealing with a touch of everything from a blooming romance (m/f) between Luke and Mara (which I adore togethe rby the way) to the sandal revolving around Mara Jade and her sordid past and the political spotlight that always surrounds Leia, and of course Han, scruffy witty and handsome Hand Solo...Throw in some originial of your own too which I'm finding myself rather fond of that kindly old Doc you put in, has a real hear tI think.

    I wonder, what will Mara say/do/think when she find out ALL of what happened to her fiance. Now that is a chapter to look forward to. Now, I hope you haven't cut off from writing this fanfic because I'm addicted to it I mean after what 25 chapters....you can't leave me hanging like this!!!!(well you could)
    It's inhumane!
    lol
    I really hope you haven't quite on this story, if you have PLEASE let me know because I will be cheking in periodically to see what becomes of 'Whisper Your Weakness' love the title to by the way.
    Its eye catching.
    Anyhow, please tell me one way or the other.
    Pretty please?
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  • From ANON - Angel_mine on February 01, 2006
    I'm so glad to see this updated. Another great chapter, Kayladie! I wonder where Luke will go and what's up next? I wasn't surprised Leia couldn't honor her promise to Luke - but it looks like he's taken matters into his own hands and is not going to give them any other choice. Nice to see Luke assert his independence and to focus on what he needs and not what others need for a change. As always, I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Cherry! on February 01, 2006
    THE TRIUMPHANT RETURN OF "WHISPER YOUR WEAKNESS"!!! I'm ecstatic! Thanks for not giving up on this- it's just got so much content and creativity. Well, hopping right back in- I thought I'd be upset that Luke wasn't bucking up and smiling anyway, but I've found that I like this response from him much more. Luke is human, after all, and I adore that he's allowing himself to be selfish when he needs to be. I'm of course looking forward to Mara taking matters into her own hands eventually, but until then, Luke finding his peace of mind is important to the development of the story. We can't have him going postal- who knows how much damage a rampaging Jedi master could do. OO' (Seriously, guys! Just let him have his damn space!)
    Super psyched for the next installment-
    Cherry!
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  • From ANON - Jake on January 21, 2006
    Yay! A new chapter! Woohoo!

    This was a very intense chapter, emotionally speaking and you've once again hit the mark. From Luke's depression and Han's frustration to Darek's nervousness and Leia's pain when she discovers her brother has essentially run away and doesn't want to talk with any of them--it's all very real and convincing. Quite frankly, I'm not at all surprised by Luke's decision to run, particularly after he was told he was being selfish for wanting some space to deal with everything (I take it Leia doesn't know about the 'conversation' Han and Luke had? Han was most certainly pushing). What's Luke going to do if Mara does decide to go after him? And is Luke's family going to discover what, exactly, happened to him? Poor Darek--hope he's up to having the group camping out on his doorstep. I can't wait for the next chapter to find out!
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  • From ANON - Rian on January 19, 2006
    I'm so glad you're back! I've been patiently waiting for this chapter...for 4 months. ; ) Poor Luke, he really does need some time to think things through. He's not one to enjoy people fussing over him in the best of circumstances, let alone this. It's a shame he had to go outside his circle of friends to find an ally. But I can understand their pain as well. I can't wait for Mara to save the day. You did the doctor's reaction to her glares very well...an amusing part of an otherwise angsty chapter.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 18, 2006
    yeah you are back. good chapter.
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  • From DMSandArica on January 18, 2006
    Oh wow! What an emotional chapter! The depth of Luke’s depression broke my heart, but was completely understandable. I can also see why he’d want to withdraw and ‘fix’ it without any help. He always was a do-it-yourself kind of guy.

    Loved the scene where the doctor walked in to find all Luke’s family and friends arguing, LOL. And Han rocked in this chapter! Leave it to him not to pull the punches and confront Luke with that famous Corellian tact. ;)

    I’m very much looking forward to where you take this next!

    ~Arica

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