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Reviews for Bad Lunch, Good Dessert

By : hellborne
  • From AlBelle on May 22, 2014
    I hope wherever you are, dear Hellbourne, that you can read this and smile. I've discovered your wonderful fic writing abilities far too late.i have only been reading your stories for two weeks, but was grieved and saddened to learn of your passing almost ten years ago. I love your fiction, and your wonderful writing abilities. I just hope wherever you are, whatever form you have taken, that you continue to write wonderfully. Much love, ferret mommy... Your newest fan, Detafo.
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  • From ANON - COOKIE!!!! on July 15, 2006
    YAY!!!!! CHOCLATE FETISH WILL!!!!!! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!My sister says she'd like what he's haveing....MOM!? NOT YOU TOOO!!!!!! EEEWWWWWW MOM DON'T SAY STUFF LIKE THAT!!!!!!(curls into a ball looking for happy place)
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  • From ANON - Ish Poisend on July 14, 2006
    OH. MY. GOD.
    This what hilarious, drugged Jack, confused Will, the smut the sex, and wonderfull ending!
    WHAHA. I laughed till I cried till i laughed again.
    Meanwhile, I got soaked in more then just tears ;)
    Very well done, and enjoyable read.
    Hug.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 04, 2006
    Hi love you!
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  • From ANON - Demon on January 01, 2006
    This was absoultly amazing great work I love this ^-^
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  • From KimikoChan on December 30, 2005
    o_0 best will/jack story ever!!!!
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  • From ANON - Tsukiyomi on December 30, 2005
    I loved it! At first I thought it would be a bit terrible since it was rape, but it was made more consensual halfway through. Really good one-shot.
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  • From ANON - Lost on December 30, 2005
    I love your story I wish you were here to make more like it Momma this for you! Girl!
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  • From ANON - AREWEN MELETHERON on November 26, 2005
    THE STORY IS REALY GOOD .....AND WOW THAT WAS ONE MEAN CASE OF FOOD POSIONING!
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  • From ANON - Apollo on September 05, 2005
    I'm shocked! No, not really...I adore it...Chocolate Covered Sparrow?

    Here I was thinking the lemon was a hallucination and not real at all...and then BAM it's real and yeah..

    --licks lips-- I shall be remembering this one.
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  • From on September 03, 2005
    Chocolate covered butt sex,my new favorite food...
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 10, 2005
    *squeals wth joy* I loved it but I have one complaint: There's not enough of it!!
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  • From ANON - Kimura on July 09, 2005
    I almost wish it had been longer! I loved this. The girl that requested it pretty much read my mind. ^_^
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  • From ANON - DaNNie Yoko on June 28, 2005
    Woot!Happy happy!I like Chocolate even more now!^.^
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  • From ANON - Joseph on June 24, 2005
    Three words for you.
    1) Drool
    2) and
    3) Faint

    I absolutley loved the story. Especially the little recipe of Jacks. (I'm gonna have to try that with my b/f ^-^.) It's an amazing story and as it was said earlier...I wish there was a sequel. I showed the story to my boyfriend Rob and he couldn't walk normally for atleast 15 minutes. (Which is probably the best you'll get with him.) Anyway. No need boring you with my sensless babble. Write on! You are amazing!
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