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Reviews for Oranges

By : jarbabyj
  • From Evilniiko on September 14, 2009
    O.O wow that was hot i think i'm gonna take a cold shower now. I have to say you are the first aurthor to make me want one. please keep up the awesome work.
    Niiko
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  • From akathetoad on August 08, 2007
    Ahhh lemoney goodness. Or...Orangey as the case may be. Very nice.
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  • From ANON - ash on January 08, 2006
    update this
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  • From ANON - Scrawl42 on May 27, 2005
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    It's rare that an original character doesn't become a Mary-Sue. I'm proud of you.
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  • From ANON - Jamelith on May 20, 2005
    Hot! Hot! Hot! I hope there is more to come!
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  • From ANON - amniarix on March 02, 2005
    Hoooo! That was hot. A very nice PWP. Made all the more interesting by well fleshed out emotions and dialogue. Good Job.
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  • From ANON - shivingdeep on January 07, 2005
    HOTT DAYUMMMMMM JARBABYJ...OMFGGGGGGG!! This is sooo hott, sexxxxxxxy, erotic, heart-felt, sad, sweet and a whole bunch of other things. I'm all teary-eyed because ol gurl was so afraid to let go and be pleasured. She kept saying Sir, like a freakin robot there to only serve him. It was soo very sweet and touching of him to say that he wanted to hear HER!! He just didn't want to be pleasured..he want to please HER also and I LOVED THAT. MY GAWD I LUVE THAT..I WANT MO PLEASE...PLEASE say there's more because this has touched me soo much...Thanks for writing...GRRREAT JOB!!
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  • From ANON - Calling The One True Jack. on November 09, 2004
    I like this story very much. Against my will I found myself looking for Riddick fanfics, and I was pleasantly surprised to find this one.
    I like your style very much, and your portrayal of the character of Riddick is nearly flawless. He does and says things in this story that make me smile to myself and think "Yeah, that's Riddick alrightThouThough we are but humble peddlers of pornography there's no reason that it shouldn't be done with the style and clasat yat you have managed. Well done, you should be very proud.
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  • From ANON - Meredith on September 13, 2004
    Excellent story! I can't wait to hear about the tattoo. I hope you continue with this story.
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  • From ANON - Tina on September 06, 2004
    Hi,

    please write a new chapter!!!

    PLEASE !!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From dawnenab on August 10, 2004
    Oh my...well. That was quite enjoyable. I am truly hoping that this is not the end. Riddick...mmmmmmmm.....

    ~Ali
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  • From ANON - Y.S. on July 22, 2004
    WOW! Your portrayal of Riddick is PERFECT!!! Hot, sexy and bad-ass all in one! Please continue~! I can't wait to read more!!
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  • From ANON - Duamuteffe on July 20, 2004
    Very good read- I'm enjoying this immensely. I look forward to a continuation.
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  • From ANON - Ditto on July 15, 2004
    I'm with you. This is fantastic! More please?
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  • From ANON - Ditto on July 15, 2004
    I'm with you. This is fantastic! More please?
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