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Reviews for The Logic of Desire

By : Earelen
  • From ANON - Alexandra Paris on January 17, 2005
    I just read chapter 2, this story is just getting better! But when are the other girls going to have some fun with the agents?
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  • From AlexandraXI on January 17, 2005
    Girl I love this chapter! Very hot!
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  • From ANON - Laurie E. Smith on September 06, 2004
    I just finished reading all 8 chapters and... wow. I MUST have more of this story! I didn't think "femOC gOC gets it on with the Agents" could be done in a way that didn't make me roll my eyes, but "The Logic of Desire" has convinced me otherwise. It is intelligent, well-written, and hot. Very, very hot. :-)
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  • From ANON - Cecilia on August 20, 2004
    Whew! I'm exhausted after reading this story! Please continue...I must know Xan's fate. Will she remain in Zion, now that she know the awful truth? My money is on the Agents somehow convincing her that she should remain with them in the Matrix. Somehow, the Agents seem more humane in their treatment of Xan then her fellow Zionites. By the way great sex scenes, they left me breathless. Awesome!

    C.
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  • From ANON - Lady Shiva on June 09, 2004
    Omg..this story is sooooooo good! Your descriptions and imagry are simply amazing. I've never read a matrix story,lemon or otherwise, that made me feel more like i was there. Please please please pleeease update soon! I'm dying to know what happens!
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  • From magnolia31 on March 28, 2004
    I'm not normally a fan of agent smut, but I think this is well-written and hot as hell. Please continue. I want to see how Xan resolves the conflicts she feels.
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  • From ANON - Cathy on March 26, 2004
    I think I'd have enjoyed this story more if she had just beevolvvolved with one agent (preferably Smith!). It is not plausible to have a deep and meaningful relationship with three men (agents?). I only read a bit, and was put off by the fact that the MC does seem a bit on the shallow side. I haven't read as far as the chapter about the rape (I've just read the reviews), but I do think that too many stories on this site glorify rape, and characters who are raped recover from it far too quickly. I'm not sure I'd want anything to do with people (agents?) who'd raped 107 people, either, but hey, she's your character.

    You write well, but the emptiness of the sex is a bit offputting.
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  • From ANON - Kim on March 24, 2004
    I love this story so far :) Please update again soon :)
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  • From ANON - Selina on March 24, 2004
    Well, now, I have finished reading this new chapter. Described in one word: it's... Amazing. When you first started writing your story, I thought it would be an original Smith sex story, but now it's turning into something deeper - something I like quite a lot! I love the references to the Animatrix, your describtions of 01 and the War - and it's origin. I am a strong believer that Humans have started the War - and not the machines.

    Keep up the good work - and keep updating!

    Love,
    Selina
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  • From ANON - Estellio on March 23, 2004
    YYYYYEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSS!!!!!!!! I cannot tell you how happy i am. I nearly fell of the chair when i saw LOD and chapter eight. I actually shouted out WOOHOO! And began to punch the air (That's why i nearly fell off, bandy chair.) Don't you dare go away again. This story is just so good. ('c',) b
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  • From ANON - Selina on March 22, 2004
    omg... OMG.... O M G!!!! You've.... you've....UPDATED!

    *faints and lays on thoor oor for the next 5 hours*
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  • From ANON - Eärelen on January 03, 2004
    Hail, my encouraging reviewers!

    I am really, really sorry that I haven't updated in so very, very long! Real Life just took over all my time with a vengeance for the past half-year. However, I defininitely intend to finish this tale, and in fact havgun gun writing the next chapter - I'm a slow writer, though, so I can't promise when it'll show up (certainly not in the next couple of weeks!). Check back in February - I'll try to have it posted by then.

    Thanks for all the encouragement, I really appreciate it, and I'm glad y'all are enjoying the fic.

    Cheers,
    Eärelen
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  • From ANON - theatreangel on January 02, 2004
    Are you ever going to finish this story?
    Please, I have loved it so far... I need you to finish it. Please, please, please, please, please!
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  • From ANON - lady on December 08, 2003
    I am waiting anxiously for the conclusion, pleeeease!
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  • From on November 12, 2003
    PPPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEAAAAAASSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEE Update. Or at least let us know that you are writing thxt oxt one. I have been waiting SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO LOOOONOOONNNNNNNNNNGGGGGGGGG for the next part and it isn't here yet, sniff. I know i sound like a baby but the fic is really good and i wanna see how it ends. Just let us know if your still writing or to give up hope of LOD8.

    Estellio Peredhil
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