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Reviews for Briseis.

By : LydiaValentine
  • From ANON - lullaby87 on June 17, 2004
    Brilliant story so far! Beautifully written! I was so enthralled with their (achilles' and briseis') story in the movie, it's enchanting! Made me cry so hard! damn, i love love! lol...anyways, you've done a truly awesome job so far..can't wait to hear more from you :)
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  • From ANON - lullaby87 on June 17, 2004
    Brilliant story so far! Beautifully written! I was so enthralled with their (achilles' and briseis') story in the movie, it's enchanting! Made me cry so hard! damn, i love love! lol...anyways, you've done a truly awesome job so far..can't wait to hear more from you :)
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  • From ANON - Lydia on June 17, 2004
    Latin Lady> If you want to be technical its more of a chronological error. Sort of both. Within the temple of Vesta resided the sacred items that Aeneas took with him from Troy. So for Briseis to have become an actual Vestal she would have had to have fled with them.

    But to be perfectly honest this isnt a historically accurate story, nor even a mythologically accurate one. Its just a story. Not even an original one at that. I chose the term "vestal" because not many peoplelly lly associate it with Vesta. It's more a loosely used term for virgin priestesses. Also in the days of old the priestesses often served several gods (well really they served all the gods as Briseis mentioned in the movie). It was not uncommon for a maiden to be beholden to several gods at once. Cassandra herself was torn between Apollo Sunlord and Pallas Athene, who both set their mark on her.
    But anyway your point is taken and appreciated. Astute of you to pick it up :)
    ~*Lydia
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  • From ANON - latin lady on June 16, 2004
    just a tid bit of nifty cool info , did you know that menaleus and agamenon realy dont die in fact menaleus manages to take helen back and whe they get home ... he kills her thmoremore but you probaly dont care *sigh* oh well keep writing its marvalous
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  • From ANON - latin lady on June 16, 2004
    you just made a geographical boo-boo it would be impolsible for briseis to be a vestal virgin because the temple of vesta is 1) in Rome not troy and 2) not even built yet but its ok i made the same mistake at first
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  • From ANON - Sagittarius on June 16, 2004
    What a wonderfully written tale! I don't usually enjoy het stories so much but you certainly have a gift of drawing the reader into the tale, making them care for the character of Briseis. Please don't give up because you feel people aren't enjoying this - they are! They're just a little shy :) I can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - Yurbleness on June 16, 2004
    Yet another very good chapter :D I look forward to the next one. I enjoy Briseis' reactions in this fic, it feels very true to her character.
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  • From ANON - Sailor-Armitage on June 14, 2004
    HELLO wow that was great just like the movie almost, yay brad pitts sexy ass. ok i got problems...
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  • From ANON - Amelia on June 11, 2004
    hey, this stories really good....erm write more :> lol
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  • From ANON - Ananda on June 10, 2004
    Please, write more! I've been waiting ages for the next fewpterpters. This is a really sto story, but when I saw you said you'd stop posting because of low hits, I panicked. I beg you, please write more to this story. I saw Troy, and it's amazing to find someone so true to the story without making it trashy. You're a great author, and maybe I'll post one of my own stories, and I hope you'll read it.

    Your Fellow Authoress of Troy, Ananda
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  • From ANON - Ananda on June 10, 2004
    Please, writw more! I've been waiting ages for the next few chapters. This is a really good story, but when I saw you said you'd stop posting because of low hits, I panicked. I beg you, please write more to this story. I saw Troy, and it's amazing to find someone so true to the story without making it trashy. You're a great author, and maybe I'll post one of my own stories, and I hope you'll read it.

    Your Fellow Authoress of Troy, Ananda
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  • From ANON - Rogue on June 10, 2004


    So glad you are writing this!!! I have wanted to see this pair for such a long time!! I was even thinking of writing my own. I am impressed that you had all of the right lines in the second chapter. Good researching.
    This story is going well, but i think the next chapter will be the one with most of the meat. The next chapter is when you will add most of you own ideas and interpretations. I am excited to see how you will lead the two of them. I dont know if this is being considered. But are you going to stay true to the movie? I personally dont care if you stray a little. Just keep the story hot and sexy!!
    One piece of advice: It would be sooooo much easier to read if you put space between your paragraphs. Other than that well done.
    Oh and i don’t know why but people at this site don’t review…. it can get really annoying. Like you said you are getting a lot of hits and no reviews!! I say just keep going with your story and keep asking for reviews. They will come. Update soon!!

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  • From ANON - Nightschild on June 09, 2004
    Hey i love your story... i doesn't keep to close to the movie which is a good thing. It's a nice use of imagination and i look forward to reading more!
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  • From ANON - Tina on June 09, 2004
    I love your story.
    Write more.....

    Pleeaaaseeeeee!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Gilraen on June 08, 2004
    Go ahead, you're doing a great job. :)
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