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Reviews for Twist of the Fates

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  • From ANON - Setare on June 05, 2004
    Great, great and great again. Feed us soon with new chapters!!! PLEASE!!!
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  • From ANON - Mereneith on June 04, 2004
    That was soooooooo good!!! Your level of detail, plot building, and character building was amazing. You have done a fabulous job with this story. I can't wait for Ch. 5. Please update soon!!
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  • From ANON - fiestyred on June 04, 2004
    Patroclus' decision to tell Agamemnon is a good twist - I like it VERY much. I understand his jealousy and I love it when I can actually feel that emotion pouring from the words. Very good job. ;)
    I'
    I'vingving the vulnerability that Paris feels, yet the defiance he possesses throughout it all. I can't wait to see how it will turn out when Agamemnon finds out about Achilles' prize catch. ;)

    Keep up the wonderful work. Cheers!
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  • From ANON - cyndrarae on June 04, 2004
    Excellent story! Very very well-written and gawd the cliffhangers are so effective! I liked the flashback about Troilus.. you've set up a very convincing and interesting background for Achilles' obsession with Paris. Cant hardly wait for you to get to the main event ;) Hope you update soon?
    cheers, Cyndra
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  • From ANON - Yana on June 04, 2004
    oh no please don't let the king know that Paris is with them
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  • From ANON - elfdancer on June 04, 2004
    I'm loving this story--it's quite well-written, and I've been searching for good Paris angst for what seems like forever! Glad to have finally found it; looking forward to more chapters. :)
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  • From ANON - Sarryn on June 03, 2004
    I am in eager anticipation of more! I do so love a good ravishing Paris story. Wonderful job!
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  • From ANON - Yana on June 03, 2004
    nooooooooooooooooooo poor paris
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  • From ANON - Miss Rabbit on June 03, 2004
    Thank you for this rather wonderful bit of sl It It's a fabulous idea and you're writing it beautifully.
    And thank you for putting in Troilus! Poor boy, he was completely written out of the film, and after Shakespeare wrote that nice play about him. Mind you, I can go no for ages about all the mistakes, so I won't (what happened to the ten-year siege, mutter mutter).
    So yes, I'm enjoying this one. Please update with fairly good speed?

    Mm, Shakespeare, leading the way in slashing characters from the Iliad. (Troilus and Cressida, Act V Scene 1: Patrocles described as Achilles' "masculine whore")
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  • From ANON - Megami_Layla on June 03, 2004
    I'm..confused..@_@ Ten years ago there was...another son? oh geeo loo lost!

    BUT!! Nevertheless, it is a GREAT story and can't wait to see what happens! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Yana on June 02, 2004
    he killed Paris
    nooo

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  • From ANON - fiestyredms on June 01, 2004
    Very interesting and well written. I can't wait to see more of this story develop. Hopefully you won't keep your readers waiting too long. ;) Keep up the wonderful work. You've defintely got something going here.
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  • From ANON - Yana on June 01, 2004
    cool story
    when is the next chapter comin gout
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  • From ANON - kali on June 01, 2004
    I sense a good story coming on..I really like your plot, and I can't wait for more to come!
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