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Reviews for Cleansing

By : QueenPenelope
  • From ANON - Cl34r on May 30, 2004
    A friend reccommented this to me,and I have to say that it's SO great :D...Why so few Achilles/Patroclus dammit >< plz continue girl ^.^
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  • From ANON - Adulot on May 30, 2004
    Thank you SO much for writing this! The writing is excellent, and your characterization of Achilles is extraordinary. The world needs more Achilles/Patroclus like this, especially since it's CANON!
    Please continue!

    -- A
    (P.S.: "cousin"! *laughs like a madwoman*)
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  • From ANON - Slinder on May 28, 2004
    Plz continue,you keep improving in every chapter!!
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  • From ANON - The Sunkist Vampire on May 28, 2004
    omg... this is my absolute fav troyshadh fic ever!!! really it is, im not just saying that. you are the only writer so far that i have found that can write achilles/patroclus the way i like it. and do you know just how hard it is to find this pairing?!?!?!? you would think it would be more popular.... but thank you for writing this and please please please kiip writing the pairing! and continue with this story too!
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  • From ANON - Blue on May 26, 2004
    "When he was still a boy of twelve, he had loved to bathe with Achilles after an intense combat training session, had loved to watch his older companion’s graceful form as he dove into the water, was struck with envy of every one of the droplets cascading down his perfect body." "There was no gentleness in his kiss, only a burning desire that would either inflame or consume. Patroclus met him passion for passion, ready to be devoured as he sank into his lover’s embrace. He let out a startled moan as Achilles ground his hips against his own, feeling his hot flesh throb with wanting, as Achilles mercilessly increased the friction, nearly driving Patroclus insane. He never wanted it to end, the glorious sensations that were wag ovg over him. Gentleness, tenderness, these things were good in moderation, but there was a time and a place for savage hunger, and this was it."


    Hot imaginaries again ^_~ Keep it up
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  • From ANON - Conchi on May 26, 2004
    :loves it all:

    'bout the 3rd chap:
    Dom!Achilles and Sub!Patroclus is something original,and you made it so good :)
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  • From ANON - TXC on May 26, 2004
    *reads part 3*

    *flails*

    *thud*

    I love thee!!
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  • From ANON - Metalclaws on May 26, 2004
    Nngh!So damn HOT!!!

    You SO made my day >:D
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  • From ANON - Pathos on May 24, 2004
    *HOWLz*

    Akhilles and Patroclus doing the nasty is my new-eh,ok,not so new-drug ^_^

    You made my day.
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  • From ANON - Riot on May 24, 2004
    Cousin,right ;)

    Keep it up,the world needs more Ach/Paton lon love!
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  • From ANON - Blue on May 24, 2004
    ***Tumbsup***
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  • From ANON - Ace on May 24, 2004
    Wow!! I always found these two be hot togeher,but you made them even hotter.And I love the fact that you made Patroclus a strong warrior at his own right and not that pouty weak boy in movimovie.(Still I prefer him older than Achilles and being the brains of the outfit like in canon,Lol).Cool stuff,rock on.
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  • From ANON - Erfaciel on May 23, 2004
    Woohoo! More story! *does happy dance* You are my hero. ^_~ And, I must say, you're very cool. Not odid did you stick to the Illiad in the important places, but you took the thought right out of my head when you said that you preferred the movie version of ages for the boys, etc. EXACTLY what I wanted. AND you wounded Patroclus. I love it when my boytoys are tortured. *sigh*

    Thank you for continuing! The world always needs more Patroclus and Achilles, and since you say that the next chapter will be up due to popular demand, I gve you...*drumroll* POPULAR DEMAND! A.k.a, MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE.....

    *ahem* Please continue. ^_^

    COUSIN. (you're not the only one giggling)

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  • From ANON - Diana on May 23, 2004
    :D Better,hotter,more ineresting this one.And don't worry,none writes perfect battle scenes,I guess.You've done a quite good job for a first attempt.Loved it and liked 'pauses' that gave a further look to the chracters like "Patroclus had never known Achilles to go so slowly, or to be so gentle—Achilles was not a gentle person, on the battlefield or in the bedroom, and Patroclus had never demanded gentleness from him. Achilles was fire, passionate and absolute, and Patroclus had always been willing to accept his burns as they came. If such was the price for embracing a flame, he would pay it gladly, until the day it consumed him." Very,nice,continue if you may!

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  • From ANON - xxx on May 23, 2004
    w00t! *encourages you to keep it up*
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