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Reviews for No Mercy *revised*

By : ilya
  • From ANON - Maj on June 03, 2004
    Like the changes, they make the story more believable and they make the story evettertter that it was and the new chapter. I can´t wait to see what you are going to come up with next. Please keep writing.
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  • From ANON - Maj on June 02, 2004
    His Arm?! You have got to be kidd Tha That would ruin the story, Hector would die and that´s no fun. But I like it otherwise please keep writing.
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  • From ANON - Chrissy on May 31, 2004
    Please continue. I thought your story was really good. Update soon alright.
    Bye
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  • From ANON - gact on May 27, 2004
    Your description is really good, I can't wait to see where you are going with this.
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  • From ANON - ilya on May 25, 2004
    Hi everyone! Thanks for every review! I've revised the story, both chapters will be different (as well as the next ones), and I'll be posting them soon. Hang in there, and hope you guys will come back and read :) you make it worth writing!
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  • From ANON - villi värkki on May 24, 2004
    "I lived in Homer's, Hector's and Achilles' time"? S to to be a party pooper, but Homer lived about 500 years after the supposed battle of Troy that he described in The Iliad. Homer wasn't writing down events that he had actually witnessed (but blending tradition, myth and history) so the narrator couldn't possibly be old enough to have lived during the Trojan war AND Homer's time. Otherwise, pretty nice story, keep it up.
    I like this pairing and would like to see more of H/A. t tht this whole hate/respect vibe from Pitt and Bana in the film. (And lust, but that must have been just my own hyperactive imagination...)
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  • From ANON - kari-demon on May 22, 2004
    O.o please don't cut off hector's arm! pleeeeeeeeease!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 22, 2004
    This story is SO GOOD, and finaly a pairing that doesn't include paris, cant wait till the next chapter is up!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Lady-Willowish on May 21, 2004
    *Shocked expression* OMG! His arm!! oo that was a good end of a chapter! Keep this one going! very well done! Iloved that! :)
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  • From ANON - Angeline on May 21, 2004
    Oh crap about the arm. I'm absolutely loving this. The flashback's good too. Poor Hektor. :(
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  • From ANON - jianu on May 21, 2004
    so muromiromise,
    can't wait for the next chapter!
    sqee!
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  • From ANON - Angel on May 20, 2004
    I liked this what if very much. Please continue. :)
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  • From ANON - ceruleanblue on May 19, 2004

    Finally, someone who realizes the ultimate slash potential between Hector and Achilles! And I must say, you write EXTREMELY well for someone whose native language is not English. Normally, I avoid stories by non-English speakers, but yours is well written and coherent.



    CB


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  • From ANON - Megan on May 19, 2004
    Thank you, thank you, thank you! Finally a Hector/Achilles fic! I've been searching everywhere for one of these. I'm so glad you're writing one and I do hope that you continue it!
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  • From ANON - HuntersKiss on May 19, 2004
    Wow....prettyness. Also :::HUGGLES!!!::: Paris wasn't in it! For once! You'd think that with all the pretty people in there, there would be some other pairings. In any case, I congratulate you on a lovely story.
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