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Reviews for Will More Strongly

By : crazyundeadfairy
  • From clorinda on October 06, 2009
    I absolutely adore your story, it's my favourite. Thank you for writing and sharing it.
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  • From ANON - Sekre on July 09, 2006
    Great story!!!! Loved it.
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  • From ANON - Cate on September 19, 2005
    I can say nothing more than...Loved it!
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  • From ANON - sak on June 12, 2005
    You twisted the mythology to work quite well for the Alexandros/Achilles pairing. Such tragedy and yet, they still ended up together. It made things satisfying even though I would have wished Hector had not lost his life. I like how you made Helen the plotting power-hungry woman (which I was beginning to suspect her motives). I thought she had already plotted with Agamemnon, but then when she escaped Troy, I realized it was for her own benefit. Nicely done. You showed how strong the passion was between Achilles and Alexandros and how much they would do to protect each other. This was wonderfully done and I hope you might write more.
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  • From ANON - Laura on April 23, 2005
    I love this story, your a great writter
    I hope you plan a sequel sometime
    bye
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  • From ANON - Yana on December 29, 2004
    nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
    don't stop
    pppllllllleeeeeeaaaaaassssssssseeeeeee write another story
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  • From ANON - Cassandra Rose on December 29, 2004
    That was a very touching (and hot at times ^.~) story. I just... it did make me cry. It takes an artist to do that; to weave words so welll as to bring one to tears. True catharsis.

    I especially liked the tiny detail that Achilles' foot never truly healed. Thanks for that tiny bit of realism. It just... dunno, made the story seem just a bit more grounded, in a good way.

    Congratulations. This was beautiful.

    ~CassieR
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  • From ANON - Yana on December 11, 2004
    yay they didn't die
    thank you thank you thank you thank you
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  • From ANON - Masquerade on December 10, 2004
    More more! This is fabulous! I love every second of this great tale! Bravi!
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  • From ANON - jamie on November 28, 2004
    I love love this story of yours so so much!

    But that's a really evil cliffee! You can't just leave it there! Please make it a happy ending? Pls? Pretty pls?

    I like how you've blended movie verse so well with your story, but hopefully you don't follow too closely, otherwise that'll mean you'll kill off Achilles! Yikes! The poor dears have gone through so much already!

    Great story telling again!

    Hugz,
    Jamie
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  • From ANON - Yana on November 27, 2004
    nooooooooooooo don't kill them off
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  • From ANON - FuctedUpKid on November 26, 2004
    Awwww, Alexandros is going to think that Achilles left him. I can't wait to see what you've got planned next. I absolutely LOVE LOVE and LOVE this story. Please update as soon as you can, because I love this story and I can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - Masquerade on November 24, 2004
    This story is awesome! I admit, I don't know much about Greek mythology and it is interesting to see Paris as Alexandros and this is a great new take on the movie. Stealing Helen just to protect Achilles? What a movie that would have made! I can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - Yana on November 20, 2004
    please don't kill them off at the end
    i want a happy ending
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  • From ANON - Yana on October 30, 2004
    please please don't kill them off in the end
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